Nice job.

I love to play in the rain since I was a little kid; let the water drops hit my face and let it drench my body. I was a lucky guy since I never got sick, regardless of how much I stay under the rain. I’ve seen many sad memories in a rainfall, even so, I still treasure those moments because they remember me the hardships I overcome after them. It has been a long time since I let myself enjoy a rainy day, but maybe one of these days I will enjoy those memories again.

A kiss under the rain is a wonderful memory; despite the coldness, those warmth lips can make you forget everything.

I’ll continue my reading later; for now let my say “Gokurosama deshitta”

Very sweet ^_^

Aww, that was very cute. An excellent morning read for me, thanks for posting!

I loved it XD

SO BEAUTIFUL! Just rewatched Noir this weekend and thought I'd find myself some noir fics to read and I came upon this one! the writing was flowing and really added to the mood of everything. The most powerful part of this fic was the dialogue. It was simple and subtle and yet, it went through a few important points of their relationship ... Noir style. Really nice fic. Made me happy and if it were to rain in the near future, I think I'd go play out. haha.

well, i think it`s rather nice. More fanfiction like that. well done. thank you

I love every Noir fanfiction you've done! =]

That was so cute...X3 Okay, so I've only JUST finished watching the first 5 eppies of the anime, I'm still a huge fan of Mireille/Kirika...it's just...RIGHT...

This was adorable, please write more on this pairing.

Very nice. I've read it three times in a row, and still can't find a thing I don't like. I love the subtle, quiet mood and muted emotions while they stand by the window, and the transition to the scene outside, which could have been abrupt, is made smoother by the continuity of feelings. The way their behaviour evolves slightly over the course of the story is nice as well - nothing major, just minute brushes of changes. And you know how to use the proper wording to set a mood.
I think the characters are very slightly OOC in the second part of the story when compared with what they show in the anime, but it's a slight difference and there's no need to suspend one's disbelief : they feel right nonetheless. Very good job overall (far better than anything I can do at any rate :-)).

That was good. i've read most of your fics and i think they're all really good. Write more. ^_^

Well, this is my first Noir fic since I've just finished watching the entire series. You've got the mood of the series and both character's voices down. Sweet fluff between Mirielle and Kirika. Keep up the good work and have a good day, :)

Amazing. Just amazing. Another wonderful story. You always have the best scenerios too...each one is very original. I think your stories should be made into doujinshi, seriously! If you draw you should consider it! Anyway keep writing! I'll be wating for your next story.

Ah as I watch from the cliffs to the sound, seeing the lightning hitting the water, the smell of ozone in the air. I am reading this your latest. The writing improves, as it continues to paint vivid pictures of emotions, senses and passions. Your descriptions bring me there as a compassionate observer, caught up in that time; endlessly.

Your hook is progressing, time for more than a short story.

Thanks again...

nice
kirika'll play doctor for mireille after?