I
love
you.
FINALLY A WRITER THAT DOES EL AND SANDS JUSTICE
=D
mostly El
cause Im a mariachiwhore
ALL THE SAME
I give it...
an A
for awesome

Lovely story, I like the changes that are taking place in El even more than those in Sands.

I love this story and the fact that you aren't getting many reviews for it is a crime!

Wow, there was so much good stuff in here, such complicated characterizations. Another really excellent story. You have a real way with words.
One thing that caught my attention right off the bat: "Reality is not nearly so kind as her gentle sister, Fantasy." That's great. The whole story was captivating. Please write more.