I really liked this story, since it shows a lesser known side of the Son brothers. I loved the fluff between Gohan and Goten, and I just about went 'awww' when Gohan hugged Goten at the end. Thank you very much for writing this!

o: woahz very, very, VERY emotional, but it's really nice

The part with Vegeta watching made my visualize a stalker bit there ._. Curse you my visual thinking!

Back to the emotion part: Like I said, REALLY emotional, alot of envy and anger, sadness, and the end...happy and well...feeling better :3

Nice Writing! @

(sniff)...WA! that w-was so sw(sob)eet! this defint;y going on my faves...WA! T_T

I really REALLY liked this story! It's my favorite Goten/Gohan angst fic! You captured there emotions perfectly imho! I'm sorry I didn't catch it sooner! ((Btw, I apologize for adding you to my authors alerts list before I reviewed this, I was having computer probs and it wasn't letting me, so I apologize again for that!)

I love that song! Jars of Clay is an awesome band! KEEP IT UP!

SonChan

nice showing the dramatic side of DBZ, are anymore chapters coming out for this story?

This story is really good! I loved how you added some of Gohan's feelings into it. Although the story is about Goten, other stories I have read never really let Gohan explain anything. Yet this one you did, very good.

-Son Akito

Hey! I like your story! Yah, maybe a lil OOC but it really wasnt that bad becoz I could imagine them saying that. _ Anyhoo, I love Goten and Gohan stories they are always good. Jus like yours! So I hope to read more stuff like that from you. D

Ja Ne

Willow

Oh! That was so kawaii! Great! I like Gohan and Goten stories because it really shows you the relationship between.

Nothing was wrong with the characters, it was very well written. I've read your profile and about flames, yes I know they are annoying but I accept them because I can see if I have done anything wrong and they inspire me if they are hideous because I want to prove them wrong!

Later!

Chibi Goten-chan

Hiya! This is such a quality fic! Man, i love it! Can you write more? Pease?

Im no great with words, but from the bottom of my heart, it is GREAT! Keep up the good work! _

Hi, i liked it. Your story was really cute and sad in a strange kind of way, its really good i hope you write more stories soon -

I never heard of this series but I'll stick to this fic because I like it. I'm not an anime

x-pert so can't advise you anything. ;)

Wow! That was quite good! Very in Character! You do your homework well! lol!

Super-Veggie-San