If this story is OVA based then shouldn't Ayeka, Washu, Sasami and the rest have been aware that something was wrong with Jurai's trees through Tsunami? Also, aren't Earth's governments aware that their planet is part of Juari's territory? I thought that was one reason why no one ever investigated the odd goings on around the Masaki shrine.

Other than that, this seems to be and interesting story. I like it when the gang travels to other planets instead of always hanging around Okayama.

i like the story please continue it

Wow! Very interesting. Always interested in stories where the general populace learn about the Tenchi household. Looking foward to more.

I like this story so far, but written accounts of spaceship battles aren't as interesting as visual depictions. I also like the way you're having the Earth authorities notice something's going on. One would think this planet is populated by morons from the lack of notice taken by the authorities in most fics.
Is your ship going to crash near the Masaki shrine like just about every other ship that comes around. That's been done too much.
Another thing that's been overdone ad nauseum is the way so many writers have all the girls at Tenchi's house fall for the "Oh so hunky" new guy. I hope your story will be more original and I hope you realize that most people read fan fics because they want to read about their favorite characters not s.i characters.

Interesting start look forward to the next chapter!

P.S I hope you update Kaibyaku Muyo! soon as i have been waitng to read the next chapter for sometime.