OMG! PLEASE update soon! x

u can't just stop there! PLEASE update soon! PLEASE! x

Hah! Bloody brilliant! im SO loveing this. Yo! ^_^ Tis Sammi! your MUST update this soon!

*begs* tis great!

HI!!
I keep saying it, but your writing is really coming along great! With each chapter, I see so many improvements. It was so sweet for Molly to want to keep Harry to herself for a little while and the twins were so in character! I love that what is now called,'twin speak' where they finish each other's sentences! My story right now is a bit too full of filler and needs clipping, but my major battle is going to take place in a couple of more chapters and then it's action all they way to the end. If you're serious about help for a battle, I'd be happy to help anytime! My short story that is featured on SIYE has five chapters in total of about seven pages each and contains a battle in which Snape is involved and doesn't know quite what to do when faced with both students and Death Eaters at the same time. It's not my best battle scene in 'Five More Minutes' but I'd gladly help you out if you want.
I loved the scene where Miranda lands in Dumbledore's office. That was perfect. She liked the floo whereas Harry hates it. Perhaps she is more cut out to be a witch than she has ever known? I am looking forward to some interaction between Miranda and Hermione. It will be interesting to see how this will fit with Hermione having a sister.
I imagine the reunion will be very angst filled with Harry not wanting to explain why he left and his friends imploring him not to do it again and just accept that they're going to be there for him come what may.
I'm intensely curious to find out what will happen with Ginny...This is a very intriguing story and I always knew you'd do well with this (insert Nearly Headless Nick's voice there)

Well, my dear, once again, a fabulous chapter, and you have outdone yourself. I'm looking so forward to more and hope you have more time for your writing now. if you'd like me to email you some chapters, just let me know...I can't wait for you to read my battle scene now...

He's back! (and so are you, goodies :))

Another great chapter.

yay! another chapter. It was really good. Hope you update soon!

Yay, another update! And RonHermione-ness! I'm happy now :)

Great chapter! You have Stan Shunpike down pat! Always kind of nosy and stuff. Ron's dream was done very well and I liked the way Hermione woke him. Is this dream a foreshadowing of things that will come to pass? Does Ron perhaps have some seer in him? It was a very good teaser to mention Ginny's thoughts when she saw Ron and Hermione together. That will intrigue your readers for sure. I read your responses...you're not going to kill Miranda are you? I liked also, how you had Hermione basically repeat Ron's request that she does not get involved. It was sweet, and it drove home the fact that both know what sacrifices they may end up making by helping Harry. The story gets better and better all the time. Once exams are over, maybe we will see some more chapters up?? I hope so, as I eagerly anticipate reading it. Good one! and Bravo for sticking to it!

Yay! You finally updated! Not that I can remember the last chapter anymore...

Yes, anyways. Keep it up!

i really like this story. please keep it up!!

HI!! Still here and not going anywhere until you finish this fabulous story! The title you have chosen is really showing through in this chapter. I am so glad you have allowed Harry to cry. So many writers forget that he is scared of doing what he must, and they see him as super Harry and not as a human, and a young one at that with so much to lose. I love that Miranda has reminded him of this and is not leaving him. The Knight Bus is a fabulous idea to get him where he has to be, and I can't wait to find out where they are going! I hope that Harry's friends from Hogwarts can help him as it has become a popular notion that love is part of the power that the dark lord knows not...I have pressed the highly recommend story button with previous reviews, so I hope that helps. Your writing has gotten even better since the beginning of this story. It is very polished grammar and spelling wise, unlike mine. It is a small chapter, but it packs a wallop of information and definitely makes me want to read further, which brings me to UPDATE SOON!! The closer to the battle a story gets, the more updates I'm going to need. How many more chapters do you anticipate? Actually, the closer you get to the final battle, the more I wonder, how do you stand on major character deaths...oh no! I hope none of the major characters get killed and I've become attached to your own created character Miranda, so I hope she comes through alright too! As a new character, she is very well thought out and fits nicely and smootly in the story line. This is a great story!! Thanks for the time to sit and relax and sip a tea while enjoying a good read!!

Good story, but the ending for this chapter was a little weak and sappy. If their going to Hogwarts, it should have taken more to convinve Harry. If not, good luck! Keep writing and don't feel bad. I just took exams last week. Pain in the ** some of them. Especially math. English, band, Oceanography, and Health, easy. English, please. Chemistry, I can handle. Math? Kill me now! Good lucj with the writing and I'm waiting for an update.

~AofM~

love your story it is really good

Definite tear jerker! I love it? And there are SEVENTEEN chapters? COOL! 14 more to go!

I really like it! Oh, it's so sad, though!! *sniffle* I love tear jerkers and write them all the time! Soo... good luck!