Aw, how sweet! Very nice...UPDATE SOON!

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Great story when r u gona update?

cool fic! i like all the added characters, they're good. a little predictable about Kyliah, but not too bad. but update, PLEASE! this is an original kind of fic, so i can't tell what happens next! UPDATE, UPDATE!^_^

in my oppinion, could you possibly lower the romance some?? To much, you lost the plot. And will she meet george?

this story is great!! i can't wait for more! please please please please please please please update again soon.

what happened to gary and rouel (how do u spell his name?) anyways, what about malven and george? maybe you could involve some other characters. laastly, when does shang training end? i think alanna should fight more.
other than that, it's a really great story, one that definetly has potential. oh, one more thing, when do the girls from the convent come to corus? maybe you could put that in the story.
keep up the cool story
booya

I read the whole story and I think it's got some great ideas. I'm glad there's romance and everything, and Liam won't be with Alanna later that's good because I don't like that pairing. Where's George though? Also you mentioned that she was ten but then said Thom was going to be a squire the next year, so there's some age disrepency there. And ten would be kinda young to be dating. Other than that CC i think it's super good and can't wait for the next chapter. Love ya,
Sierra

thanx for writing more i love it i always new liam had to find someone but in lioness rampant they're like the same Liam and Alanna so why is she fifteen and liams like twenty or however old he is make no sense

wow! that was unexpected! But good, very good. Anyway i can't wait to see what happens in the next chappy. bty it is very well written. Excellent job -lizzie
P.S. will you review for my story? it's called God's Intentions, thx

Nice, I'm not much help with the ideas though. All I can say is baby's are a good thing, that sounds cheesy, oh well. Keep up the good work
cheetos

Aw! What a cute chapter. Everyone's so happy together. Update soon cuz that would rock!

pretty good although like you said, it is kinda sappy. Oh, and for some help on the Alanna/Jon relationship Go to w.tamora-pierce.com and look in the spoilers section. It will have some info on the alanna/jon/george relationship explaining why alanna married george instead of jon

i liked it

an interesting turn of events...

That's ok, I hope your compatition goes went well. I love your story and hope you up date soon.
cheetos