 Ruth. 2005-08-25 . chapter 5 I enjoyed this very much as the 2 main characters were nastily true to form,the story believable {except the balaclavas,though this provided the humourous aspect}and the intriguing glimpse into the complexities of Lucius and Severus' relationship.
The only disappointments were a couple of mis-spelt words and Dumbledore's apparent unconcern in Lucius' role in the plot. |
 Kamp 2005-07-27 . chapter 5lol. i really like this one. i love the playful interaction between lucius malfoy and severus snape, the way they can be intimate with each other and still be as cruel and unyielding to others. and of course, them laughing at each other when they get hit on by various people.
the story was rather well-written as well as entertaining. and although i'm not quite sure what to make of the ending (interesting and rather curious), i did enjoy snape's response for why he could not allow it to happen:
“Frankly, I cannot stand the thought of everyone turning even more stupid than they are already.” he said, returning the old wizard’s gaze. “I have seen what it does to its victims. It’s highly annoying. A nation of James Potters, that is what plagues me.” |
 Little Tigger 2004-09-14 . chapter 4Okay, so I'm just sitting here with this big dumb grin on my face. Two fully grown Death Eaters breaking into a chocolate factory. I mean, there is just no words to describe the joy!
ROFLMAO!
LT |
 Little Tigger 2004-09-13 . chapter 3Poisoning the Chocolate Frog Supply - that is devious! YIKES! I guess I'll have to stick to Hersey's Kisses!
Love it dear! Just adore it! |
 Little Tigger 2004-09-13 . chapter 2My dear, I don't know what I enjoyed more:
The idea of Lucius impersonating David Bowie - I mean how utterly HOT is that!
Or the idea of Severus making brain eating pest repellant for "political purposes"
Mwhahahahahaha!
Seriously brilliant! |
 beatlefan 2004-09-05 . chapter 5 I write just to give you props for the DIEHARD reference in the first chapter. I had just been thinking about that movie today as I was watching Sense and Sensibility which features an equally charming, though not-so-German personage. I weep for him (nightly)as he is always so very underappreciated. Be he a certain brilliant potions genius of nefarious character or a certain brilliant terrorist genius of nefarious character I will always be willing and proud to be on his side(/molest him.) OK, I'm done now. I recently finished reading your collected works and was very much entertained/fondled. Thanks ever so much and keep up the charming work. |
 ShadowMecha 2004-08-29 . chapter 5I'd send you some me-leather, but I'm afraid you have given no forwarding address.
I like this chapter better than the others for some reason... Heehee, Dippy. Best house-elf names ever, you've got. |
 Jez 2004-08-21 . chapter 5 Hmm, it seems I was mistaken about what the great plot twist would be. I always knew it was something like that (I really did...) Frightening would be the world if it had even more morons then it already has. |
 Queen of Zan 2004-08-20 . chapter 2*fangirls madly* |
 Jez 2004-08-12 . chapter 4 Great Plot Twist? I'm thinking I may know what that's going to be. Bad puns are the greatest. Can't wait till the next chapter. |
 grendel 2004-08-09 . chapter 4 This 'un's a beaut, better keep it going... or else I'll be forced to hunt you down and papercut your eyeballs until you do :) heh heh, just kidding (or IS she?). Can't wait for The Great Plot Twist. |
 Jez 2004-08-03 . chapter 3 It's funny, and strange, and delightful. Plus the name is just too perfect. "He looked from Severus, to the chocolate frogs, to Severus, to the chocolate frogs, to Severus, who was making odd hinting movements with his eyebrows, to the chocolate frogs..." Now that's just some good comedy. :D |
 iamone 2004-08-02 . chapter 3Wow, very random... But funny... But more random. |
 Queen of Zan 2004-08-01 . chapter 1I like to fangirl people. Especially you. And myself. But you, too. |
 Lady Liadan 2004-08-01 . chapter 3 Lucius and chocolate frogs! ROFL!
Always love exasperated-Lucius. This is getting better and better. Can't wait for the next chapter. |