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LetheSara 1/15/11 . chapter 1
This is amazing. I love the combination of Egyptian Mythology and Harry Potter. It's such an inspired blend, but works so well.

It's wonderfully written and was an absolute pleasure to read.

I loved it.

xxx
CalliopeMused 10/27/08 . chapter 1
I have no idea why this works, but it does. Brilliantly. I love the easy familiarity with the Egyptian gods/goddesses, and the link to Harry Potter.
Menamebephil 3/29/08 . chapter 1
0_o

I have a feeling that ol' JK wasn't looking THIS deep into her imagery when she wrote the books. If she did, odds are her writing wouln't be so bland.

It is a truly awesome image, though.

MNBP
Mousewolf 9/29/05 . chapter 1
Did you mean for Anubis to sound an incredible lot like sirius? *Thinks* Sirus does fit the bill for a human anubis...
LolaInk 1/23/05 . chapter 1
heya, just quick review to say this sounds brilliant. i really like it! you'd better update.
thelsot1 8/10/04 . chapter 1
lets have more shale we this is geting good and i want to read more of this shizer.
Insane Pirate Dragon 8/10/04 . chapter 1
*Plasters face to computer screen*

MUST HAVE MORE!

LOVE IT! WHO WOULD OF THUNK TO MIX EGYPTIAN GODS WITH THE WORLD OF HP!

*Laughs her evil sientist laugh as white coats come and pull her away in a strait jacket*
Santa Claus 8/8/04 . chapter 1
Very interesting. I for one like it very much. I cant wait to see how this story turns out. Please, keep going.

-S. Claus
VMorticia 8/4/04 . chapter 1
Hiya. I finally got around to reading this - got an email telling me you'd posted this story some time ago, but you're not the only one who takes her time to read/review. Oh, you won the chocolate, by the way, in case you haven't checked recently.

I love this story. Ok, I admit that most of my knowledge of Egyptian mythology is from Stargate - not all, but most. I love the history, here, and I can't wait to see where you go with it. I really wanna see what part Sirius has to play in this. Always figured that veil was relevant for more than JKR implies it is.

Update soon, I'm loving it.
Mage Ren 7/31/04 . chapter 1
Great Story! Please update really really son.
Motif 7/28/04 . chapter 1
I love Egyptian myth so I really wanna know whay gonna will happen in your sixth version a lot. Well... will it involve Sirius?

I'm waiting.
Gohan00 7/28/04 . chapter 1
VERY VERY GOOD PLEASE UPDATE SOOM
Glinda 7/26/04 . chapter 1
Well...dunno bout anyone else but the god/goddess explanations helped me...! Again the most pointless review ever but as i know you live for reviews as much as i do then i feel its only fair! Ok so i'm just feeling magnaminous due to my own fic gettin a review from someone other than you! Fight the evil that is writers block!

Smiles Glinda :)
Lady Nassah 7/26/04 . chapter 1
I like the history of this fic, because it paves the way for a more complex and rich storyline. I loved the interactions between Anubis, his daughter and Horus. And the guilt he carried around with him.

A rich start to a very compelling sounding story, keep going!
Lauren 7/25/04 . chapter 1
I really liked this story! It was very gripping story. It was a bit confusing though when you wrote about Horus temporarily losing his eye, since it wasn't explained in the story untill the end. Other then that I absolutly loved it!
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