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| Smiles 2008-03-09 ch 14, anon. | abuseplease update soon, this is a story that i really enjoy reading and hope there will be more of it soon |
| rena 2007-09-27 ch 2, anon. | abuse"Piper asked crankily as she the other came downstairs? and The Dark Lord was trying to tactics". - what are you trying to say? What do these sentences mean? Please fix them and any other typos so that we can understand the story better? |
| Jen 2007-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseTypos people, typos. They make the story unreadable. "but you have circled under your eyes." It should say circles. Also when you say make Chris a woman it sounds like you want to turn him into a woman not create a woman for him to love. It's all in the wording. |
| guardian music angel 2007-06-01 ch 14,  | abusethis is good! plz update! |
| othluver16 2006-07-31 ch 13, | abuseif i could i would hire you! i luv the pandora and chris relationship and how wyatt is basically obsessed with her, so please please update soon and if you do, my cyber butt will eternally be grateful to you! |
| Miss Katrina Malfoy 2006-02-13 ch 13, | abuseOh my. I thought Pandora's mother died in childbirth? I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| electricxrain 2005-11-29 ch 13, | abuseYeah, majorly confused. But ugh! I hate Barbas. His voice... his teeth... Bleghh. Gross. He makes me sick. Anyways, great chapter! Darryl would make such a good dad. Aw... Yeah, I'm done. lol. .x. RaiN .x. |
| Altaira 2005-11-28 ch 13, | abuseI'm glad you got a chance to update! I love the way all they have to say is the word 'free' and... hee hee! I hope the situation can be sorted out! |
| Embry 2005-11-27 ch 13, anon. | abusecool, love the story! |
| electricxrain 2005-11-05 ch 12, | abuseOmg I absolutely LOVE this story! I've been reading all night and this is the best one I've come across so far. Bravo! And you beeter update soon or I might, like, die or something, and I'd hate for you to be responsible for my death. :) lol .x. RaiN .x. |
| Altaira 2005-09-17 ch 12, | abusePlease update soon- for the sake of what little sanity I have left! I would like to know soon where Chris and Leo are! |
| Drama Angel 2005-07-06 ch 11, | abuseI hope you add a new chapter to this story, its really good and I would love to see an ending. |
| Agangel 2005-06-04 ch 11, | abuseWELL I AM HAPPY THAT YOU BACK! TOOK YOU LONG TO WRITE! BUT I MISED YOU BECUS IT WAS A GREAT STORY! OR SHUED I SEY A CHAPTER? WELL pur ^+^ |
| Soccer-Bitch 2005-05-17 ch 11, | abusegreat chapter. ^_^ |
| X-identaty 2005-05-14 ch 11, | abuselove the story please update ... |