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| OrangeAce 2008-05-14 ch 5, | abuseLOL! Sanosuke/ Kaoru! hahaha =] for once, i think that Kenshin doesn't deserve Kaoru here~* ^^ great job on this! oh! and Seto was mentioned! XD though... you didn't update this for so long already. will you still continue this? =] i'm remaining to be hopeful. so... PLZ. UPDATE SOON! haha |
| LadyNorth76 2007-07-26 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great fanfic so far! I hope you update as soon as possible! I can't wait! I've added this fanfic to my alert list. |
| Midori Konbu 2007-02-28 ch 5, | abuse*wails* is Enishi going to be the bad guy?... oh well, he's quite the perfect villain I guess.. and what a fitting way to introduce Yahiko to join in the plot! |
| Midori Konbu 2007-02-28 ch 4, | abuseSigh.. and Shinomori Corp. would be packed with handsome faces! Anyway, a great progress in this chapter, wonder what'll happen when Sano starts working... hee hee |
| Midori Konbu 2007-02-28 ch 3, | abusehehehhe.. gotta love that Aoshi! and what a chance meeting at the westernized Akabeko! grrh.. and Kenshin just had to spoil it.. ^_~ |
| Midori Konbu 2007-02-28 ch 1, | abuseah, what a twist! a great beginning... and so much details are left untold... *grins* |
| WEIRDkittywwingz 2007-01-07 ch 5, | abusehehe great intro with Yahiko. The plot thickens. I'm interested in how yukishiro and sano and aoshi will all react to each other in this fic. |
| Jordsan 2006-08-29 ch 5, | abuseWOW! That was REALLY good! I like this story, it's clever and original. I can't wait to read some more. |
| Mori'quessir 2006-08-28 ch 5, | abuseYEAH! Yahiko's in it! Man I love that kid. Sano's like the coolest guy in the world. I love Aoshi as a big brother. I'm sad that Misao died, but like Kaoru, I wonder how. Enishi I can live without. Same with Kenshin, I know he's going to bring up a LOT of drama. I was reading the A/N and...17 MONTHS! That is a LONG hiatus. But I'm glad you updated! Update soon From yours etc: Mori'quessir -favs- |
| pyscho-pyro-shrink 2006-08-22 ch 5, | abusegreat story so far!! can't wait for the next one! |
| Kaoru4 2006-08-06 ch 5, | abusesaw this alert way back but man, and wanted to read and review the story immediately but Otakon jumped in the way. So here I am, days late with my review! I loved this chapter. Finally have the Enishi component in here to top it all off. Kaoru's one popular gal. The creepy Enishi, the brother Aoshi, the ex Kenshin, and the hunk Sano. All have some sort of love for her. I'm not sure why but I was actually surprised to see that Yahiko was introduced into the story. For some reason in my mind I had the thought that the intense romance stories of yours seem not give Yahiko a big role if any. But then again, Sano and Yahiko together are instant classic comic relief scenes when used in that way. ^_^ Great chapter btw. Sano's character in this story is portrayed well and a joy to read. |
| Starian Princess 2006-08-05 ch 5, | abuseSo glad you updated, finally. *grins* It certainly looks like the story's kicking off and there are still so many unanswered questions. All the characters seem connected in a very subtle sort of way and that's what really makes me smile. Sano, with his easy going attitude, is just perfect for Kaoru in this fic in my opinion, simply because her character here seems a little more high-maintenance than usual. Not that I'm complaining of course. The role actually works. Please do update soon! I look forward to your next chapters. |
| Jade Lotus 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abuseYeah! you updated! I love this story! Aside from Aoshi and Kaoru pairings, Sano and Kaoru are my second favorite. I really like how you are developing their relationship. She isn't going to go back to Kenshin is she? He is kind of an SOB, but it's one of things where you love to hate him. :) Keep up the awesome work, and please update soon! |
| JMai 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abuselol! It's seems that poor Yahiko is going to become fully bewildered by the end of the night, what with Kaoru's umm... unique personality ^_^. Thanks for updating, I nearly forgot this story until I saw it today, surprisingly I still remembered the earlier chapters. I really enjoyed this chapter, though it did bring a few questions to mind. The most outstanding one is Enishi being related to Tomoe who is married to Kenshin no doubt. I wonder the complications that would bring for our main characters. It's funny really, that the strongest and somewhat deadly RK characters are somehow related or connected to Kaoru, not that I'm complaining, yay for Souji being so protective. ^_^ Hope to see another chapter soon. Bye Belle ^^ |
| TogetherAtLast 2006-08-04 ch 5, | abuseYea, an update! To be honest...I forgot about this! But can you blame me? I hope not. Nice chapter! TAL |