this is sweet. I usually don't go for poetry in this format, but you've given it a special...I'm not sure what it is, but it's there. Very like Tsukasa. Short, simple, profound.

Good job.

Aw, that was really sweet. I love the format of the poem:)
~lily~

Aw. It's so kawaii. I think you should write a story similar to this. I would so totally read it if you did.

Just read the story, I thought it was quite nice,
and extraordinarily written...an oddly fascianting format with intersting...stuff.