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Reviews for: To Walk a Path Unwinding
Sarie 3/22/03 . chapter 1
"I walked a path of fire and ice. . ."

I love that line.

This was really well done. Usually, I hate poetry, but this one is making me reconsider my views.
Lady Hisui 5/24/01 . chapter 1
That was beautiful!
Yugure 2/5/01 . chapter 1
SPIFFY! :D :D :D Cool! I love the word choices! Very deep. Good job!
Pazu 2/2/01 . chapter 1
Wow! Awesome poem! _; It's better than I could ever do...hehe. Keep writing, you're good at it!
Ruth 2/1/01 . chapter 1
That was Great! Very descriptive! I think I'll print it out and read it on the crapper!
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