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me
2006-03-15 . chapter 12
aw... that's sweet. weird, but in a sweet way. romantic, even
padfootsmoon
2006-02-15 . chapter 11
aw...
JennaBanana
2005-08-16 . chapter 4
Ah hahaha this is hilarious! I love it.
Melodey70
2005-05-16 . chapter 8
What did Snape see? Just out of curiosity (Please forgive any mispellings).
Melodey70
2005-05-16 . chapter 7
I actually have a question, and the answer is probably Hermione or Ginny but, who is she, and her?
Wolf's scream
2005-01-17 . chapter 9
OK; enough with the "samplers" (well, that's how I used them...) -- off to read some of your longer stories -- this was also nicely done. Thanks... :-)
Wolf's scream
2005-01-17 . chapter 5
Yeah, I can see that playing out. Nicely told.
Wolf's scream
2005-01-17 . chapter 4
OK; I suppose Ron deserved that... :-} Cute.
Lizzy87
2004-11-06 . chapter 7
who died?? Ginny or Hermione?? Either one would fit in the story... enjoyed all your drabbles though chapter 9... hope you write more( both drabbles and full fics...) :)
gigifnfic
2004-10-30 . chapter 9
i ove your drabbles, and hope you,ll think of more soon. thanks, jeanne
Jedicren
2004-10-27 . chapter 8
Nice job! I really liked when you said 'staring at him with loathing out of Lily’s eyes, but with James’s face mocking him.' It did a good job of summing up how Snape feels. A lot of people have used similar phrases (myself included) but in more words. Anyway, I liked this tidbit a lot!
I-Confuse-Everyone
2004-10-25 . chapter 8
I like the 'drabble' of stories- it's good.
'Storm Inside'- this is so powerful and you can literally feel the emotions the narrator is feeling. 'Everything'- it's interesting and you've kept in the characters realy well!. 'The Set up'- this is hilarious and I really like it. 'Out of my hands'- it's sweet and i have to say this is the first story i've read thats included a Remus reaction to the animangus. 'Late night'- it's sweet and descriptive. 'A promise to quit drinking'- i feel sorry for Harry. You've described a hangover well. I guess it's Hermione that they are talking about! 'Things that can never be'- i never really thought of this story-you kind of forget about the clear up underneath the trapdoor! Snape's feelings are so personal in your story! Is this review long enough?
GiGiFanFic
2004-09-11 . chapter 8
your short fics are really good. Keep em coming.Jeanne.
GiGiFanFic
2004-09-02 . chapter 6
I enjoyed each and every one. please do more sets like. you could . if you wanted to . call them magical pot-pourrie.#1-2-3 etc. just a suggestion.pourrie is spelled wrong i know.
GiGiFanFic
2004-09-02 . chapter 2
awesome! if all the fics. concerning Harry after his 5th. yr could start like this, then maybe,instead of being so morbid , they could find some happiness for him.
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