I loved this fic, from the first chapter to the last. They should've given Zoi-zoi/Minako more screen time in PGSM, but your story more than made up for that.
I was also surprised to find another of my favorite couples, nephikichi/ami in this, along with usagi/mamoru and motoki/makoto.
You have a good writing style and the characters never seemed OC. Keep up the good work!
:)

So touching! I've really liked this fanfic. It makes the pairing of ZoisiteXMinako seem real as I've never saw it before, and the plot kept me with my eyes stuck on the PC till I finished reading. The NephriteXAmi part is so kawaii XD and I've cried rivers with the last chapter. I only think there could have been a little more of NephXAmi in the epilogue, but, well, it's great, anyway. Congratulations, and thank you for sharing your talent with us! Added to my Favorites!

I'm so happy that you finally finished this. I love the ending, and I hope that you continue to write PGSM fiction.

Wow. I didn't know that chapter 20 wasn't the end. It's nice to know that they were reborn. I'm glad everything turned out good in the end. Thanks for writing the story!

This story is just phanominal... it's absolutely superb!! ^^ I just love everthing about it! You have incredible writing ability so that you can feel the emotion come through while reading... I can't tell you how many times I cried throughout this story!! just incredible... I hope to read more of your work in the future (also another Mina/Zoi fic would be much appreciated ^.~)

Thank you so much,

X
ArcticWhisper

What an amazing epilogue. I'm so glad we got to hear how everything ended up and all the couples ended up back together and Rei is going to be OK. this was seriously one of the most amazing stories I've ever read on this site and I'm gonna miss it so much!

I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU
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YOUR STORY ROCKS!

omgomgomgomg this is so god o.o
as soon as i found the story i couldnt stop reading it XD
this is so god its amazing XD

This story is beautiful, even though I'm a huge fan of Kunzite and Minako, I love Zoicite and Minako too. I hope you will update soon, I'm anxious to see how it ends!

Very nicely done. I thought I was going to have one minor criticism--the story starts our with Minako, most of the story is about Minako, but then we get to the last chapter and she barely seems to participate. But then you get to the very bottom of the chapter and end it with C'est la Vie. Really nice touch. I was a little confused as to whether it was Minako singing it, or Usagi, or both, but either way, I think the main point is that it is not Venus who in the end saves the world from princess moon, but rather Aino Minako and her music.

I really hope you have an epilogue because I hated the way Shakespeare always ended his plays with the bodies of the whole cast littering the stage. But if you leave the ending just as it is, that is fine too. I think it is clear that both Usagi and Minako have learned that it is always possible to say goodby to the past and live for the future.

Ok, first of all, late me say this has been a story like I get so excited about when I see alerts in my mailbox for, and one of the most I look forward to reading. I think you're terrific at writing and contemplating emotions and weaving together complex plots.

That said, about this chapter: liked how Metallia invaded Rei's body and tying in the "C'est La Vie" song at the end (great through back to that Minako/Usagi moment from the series). Also, it was good you came back to the whole main concept of PGSM that Mamoru and Usagi's love could destroy the whole planet.

I just hated though how all the main characters ended up dying. It just seemed like such a letdown and also a cop out. Not to mention that I think redemption through death is not a noble concept to promote in story writing. I know that not all stories end happily ever after, but I think the amount of death that took place in this story was unnecesary and kinda, please, no offense, ruined the end for me. I'm sorry if this is too harsh. I just wanted to keep it real, and please understand that I really have enjoyed keeping up with "Romance."

I'm still really looking forward to the epilogue 'cause this story has been such a great journey and I love Minako/Zoisite PGSM stories.

I really like your style of writing and the story.
The combination of scenes of PGSM and fictional one is really great.
Also if the next chapter is probably the last one I hope you're going to update soon!

Mata ne,
Raiko^^

Let me just worship you for the amazing job you have done on this story. I love how everything has a meaning behind it. I can't help feeling bad for Rei, but also upset because she didn't deliver the letter. Of course, everything was supposed to go downhill from the beginning, but there's always that hope for a happy ending. Either way you take it, I'm sure I'll love it because your story is very well written. I can't wait for more chapters, and I hope you update frequently!

Aw, no! I will be so disapointed when this story ends. it has been one of my favorite that I have ever read on this site. I am hoping for a happy ending, but knowing the way you write, I am prepared for something beautifully tragic.

Will you do another Zoi/Minako story after this one?

i am green with jealousy. You're such a wonderful writer. and i know i've probably told you before, but its the truth! and this chapter is so sad! poor Zoi-kun! poor Rei-chan! poor everyone!