Oh come on. Do the girls get to gather?

Really good job! I hope you will write more and continue the story. 8)

PLEASE write more! I love this already. Someone needs to write more slash of any of these characters. This is the only one I have found. I love it! So PLEASE write more!

This is really good! (However - like I've said before - in the movie, Nancy's stepfather's name is Ray.)

Keep up your super-awesome writing! :)

I didn't even think of slashing The Craft...must find more...

I really do hope you'll update this soon, I like it so far. I think it's cool that you're getting into the actual Pagan-ness and not just the "ooh that's scary/awesome" qualities. I like.

This is really good. You get the character's monologues very well. We the readers can really get into their heads even if their thinking irrationally or rationally. Nancy's inablity to soften her facial expression (it looked like she stubbed her toe) is very in character, and makes for a very good read.

Even through it seems that you've stopped writting altogether, I hope that you eventually pick up your Craft stories.

Continue the good work.

LOL Wha-Whyre you hitting me. Totally Nancy XD

Please continue. This is a great story so far.

you should definatly continue this story. I love this movie and the way you write this, it is so interesting. Nancy scares me though. Didn't she get possed by a demon or something or she got all the power of mono. I don't remeber what they called the God, but that dosen't matter. This is great and you should totally continue soon.

This a great story! I appreciate how you can get into your "character's heads" and have it be true to their attitudes. Please update more. :-)

Really good so far, put more chapters up. I like reading girl on girl ;)

i love it. i also love seeing the softer side of nancy. please update

Oh my God! Sarah was right! Ha Ha Ha

Keep up the good work!

Blessed Be

May the Force be with you

Love

Bunphrionsa

I really liked it.