lmao. i was about to cry along with naruto when i started laughing at the end. rofl. nice

I love your writing style. It's like, you have all this angst and then BAM, LETS SCREW.

Was it supposed to be funny?

I liked it though.

lol a bit quick but that don't mean it was bad.

Hahaha! Great fanfic! It was funny

LMAO this story was ace =faves= poor naruto at the begining tho and the sasuke comments were ACE man lol

Cute idea. I agree with the p.s. at the end of your story. I hope you re-write the end, but the rest is good. I like the detail ^.^

screw? shag? okay not that it's any of my business and not an insult or anything but i can't really imagine them saying those words. i mean insults at each other but shag as in shaggin. it's hard to imagine.

Lmao. That was fantastic!

hmm...you're right the ending is to quick but other wise good story

*grin* Hahaha, I liked it. SasuNaru...yum...^_^

The fortune cookie one made me laugh.

Naruto and Sasuke on a rainy day...

*grins wider*

lol i loved it

Oh, come on, you skipped the best part! So not fair! -_-' Damn you.

Well, it was just too sweet... too nice. Sasuke and Naruto really are a great couple. And this was a good story of them. ^_^ Good, good.

lol
i likes it a lot
write more soon, ne??

hahahahahahaha!! alot of people probably said this. but

"Um, no. I just wanted to shag you, actually."

is the best quote i've ever read in a naruto fic. this was great :D so...*drool* xD PAJAMA-CLAD SASUKE!! who...nice.

*grins* Interesting, and I think the ending's fine. Canaries eat pet stores?