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keeperoffantasy
2008-07-12
ch 3,
abuseSeriously?! Thats the worst spot the end the story. Just when it was getting really good. I can take it when a story going nowhere suddenly ends, but THIS was pure TORTURE. so unfair!
pAge-bReaTher
2008-06-24
ch 3,
abuseHm... been a year already, it seems... hopefully, that just means it can't be too long before you update this marvelous story again! lol... PLEASE? The plot is great, and your style of writing has been delightful to read. I adore the interaction between Albus, Minerva, and Severus - especially all the flirting and bickering - and their interpretations of the Dursley family are fantastic as well. Ah... but I really am eager to see more of Harry now that he's been let out of his cell... and now that the professors are finally alone with him! I hope you decide to continue... and soon? Well, even if we all have to wait another three years, I'm sure we'll still be grateful for another chapter... ^_^ Just please don't let it die, haha... heh... >_>
whatmaybe
2008-06-18
ch 3,
abusepls update...very interested in reading more
Jeido95
2008-06-17
ch 3,
abuselove the story! please update soon! It is a great story with real potential
Diamonde
2008-06-09
ch 3,
abuseHey, this is a great fic, very original, please update again soon.
CosmicEssence
2008-05-18
ch 3,
abuseAck I love this! Upon first seeing it i thought, humor? its probably going to be some really silly crap but no this is serious and funny all at once and really quite 'laugh out loud' funny too! First chapter, with the professors 'descriptions' of the Dursleys and supposedly being highly mature had me in hysterics, i can tell you ^__^

It just all flows and fits in beautifully...and i would really really like to see this continued! End of chap 3 is just too much like a cliffhanger to bear. Plus, after reading your notes, the fic doesnt feel disjointed or read differently between the 1st 2 chaps and the 3rd like it might with 3 years in between...in fact no one would notice if it werent for the dates at the top.

So yeah..upDATE! :P
choux de bruxelles
2008-05-07
ch 3, anon.
abuseI just read your story all in one go and the diffrence between chapter 2 and 3 really doesn't show. It's great ! I can't wait to read the rest !
Phantom Melody
2008-04-29
ch 3,
abuse!
Fire of the lioness
2008-04-25
ch 3,
abuseYour writingstyle has improved. Your conversations are more realistic, though the whole pillowfight is OOC for Minerva. I look forward to seeing how Harry and the professors will get on. As you have assured us this will not be abandoned again, yet the next chapter has not arrived within the promised two weeks, I'll assume the chapter is due any day now.
chalicity
2008-04-01
ch 3, anon.
abusepoor harry! what a tough and embarrassing spot he's in! this is really good! hope to see more :)
noname
2008-03-17
ch 3, anon.
abuseThis story is awesome! I hope you continue to write it... you ARE planning to continue, right? It would be really sad if you let a story with this great a potential go! Hope to read more soon...
Lily Louisea
2008-03-08
ch 3,
abuseNo! I liked this! I _really_ liked this! Please dont stop now!
Chite
2008-02-15
ch 3,
abuseHah, I LOVE this story! I've never read a story where someone described the Dursleys quite like that!

When Severus, Minerva and Dumbledore saw Harry serving the Dursleys, they were completely FLOORED! I laughed out loud and got quite a few strange looks from my housemates when I read that! I can just see poor Harry after the Dursleys leave, lying through his teeth, telling Severus, Minerva and Dumbledore about going to St. Brutus's Secure Center for Incurably Criminal Boys and how he was just like his rotten father, peddling drugs and getting mixed up with gangs, or whatever terrible things the Dursleys tell the neighborhood.

Are you continuing the story? I really, really hope you do.
Nytewing
2008-02-13
ch 3,
abuselol, well I'm sure in some countries two weeks equals six months...

Meh, I really like this and don't get my previous comment wrong, I commpleylt understand not updating for that long (even with such a cool fic I don't like it). Don't get down or discouraged if things arn't really going how you want them too, just have fu with it and please keep em coming!

Your Friendly Neighborhood Texan ;)
forbiddenstars
2008-01-29
ch 3, anon.
abusei. demand. an. update. now.

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please? i'll love you forever?
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