And that was the last time she saw him, I think. Write more! :)

To tell you the truth, I don't know about Nigredo that much, but this was good all the same.

Where to start... got it! You made everything so real for them. The way MOMO felt, the way chaos talked. You are truly a experience writer. Good Job

WOW! Very nice chapter! I liked how you used the story of Peter Pan in this chapter! Very well written! I hope you write more!

Awesome. -Hugs Nigredo- Don't worry I love you!

How sweet!! ^.^ That's so nice of chaos!

OH...MY...

=cries=That was so beautiful.

MOMO's sensitivity just flows through this whole thing. It's a believable scenario and bringing up a few often-overlooked quotes and allowing the reader to see through MOMO's perspective, through her sad eyes looking at the world, is just wonderful.

You took MOMO, wrapped her character in sparkly wrapping paper, put a mold to her personality and then sprinkled a whole lot of salt and pepper on the top.

...that was BEAUTIFUL.

Aw!! That was a great story! I hope you write more!!

MOMO is so... very, HER.. in your fic.

A very nice piece, albeit short. :(

I hope to see more from you!:)

ah i absolutely love your detail! Heck i love all your fics! chaos' words are so true to. Update soon! btw, what happend to your other fic?