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Potterworm
2009-12-24 . chapter 16
This story was - to be quite honest - bewildering. Even after reading the whole thing, I'm not quite sure I understood it all perfectly. That being said, it was incredibly well written, completely pulsing with tension. I read it so very quickly because I HAD to know what happened.
S-J 7
2009-12-19 . chapter 11
the title seems like i tweeked version of the film 'Cruel intention' wasn't by any chance thats where you got the title...oh well...gr8 storyit absolutly awesome im lovin it
Miss Eliza Azraelian
2009-10-31 . chapter 16
Brilliant! This was a wonderful story! Cannot wait to start reading the sequel! I am making myself go to bed... Felicem Samonium! (Latin for Happy Samhain!) Thank you so much for sharing your writing! *glompies* I wub you!

Cheers,
Priscilla.
White Butterfly
2009-10-25 . chapter 4
Oh, the message that had been prepared for George and Fred is an absolutely wonderful end to this chapter. *was entirely gleeful about it*
A Bibliophile
2009-10-15 . chapter 4
I love Fred and George and your portrayal of them is so accurate, it makes my love of them indefinitely stronger.
deeps85
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
read the whole story on my phone
very good and well written
and of course, i am waiting for more. so i will go check your profile and see what i find there
z
2009-07-25 . chapter 16
next chapter please...i'llbe waiting.year 4
bookivore
2009-07-12 . chapter 16
This is a really cool concept and the way you've written it you took advantage of the fact that you can draw out the suspense for the entire rest of the series. I haven't looked but I hope you wrote several more of these. The main issue I had is that it gets confusing! :)
RandomDream
2009-07-10 . chapter 16
:) I read this all in virtually one sitting, and it's been truly excellent. The intensity of the dramatic sequences and the plot itself makes it an absolutely beautiful read. I love Hermione here -actually, I also adore Sirius and Remus in your story.

Writing style is really beautiful. It pulls on your heartstrings -really. It's very intense and climactic, especially the parts where she sees the memories and the future.

I hope there's a sequel. :) Keep writing, please. Thank you very much.
lumos.maxima
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
gah! I absolutely adore your writing.
Favored
2009-06-26 . chapter 16
Is there going to be a sequel?
topazxx
2009-04-08 . chapter 16
Loved it - especially how Hermione is a seer.

What I love about this story is, that hermione and sirius dont get together! That would totally ruin the story.
Multitaskmom
2009-03-23 . chapter 16
Such an interesting and unique twist to the story. I really enjoyed myself. I hope that you continued on into the next years with it. If I remember right, you have a fourth year fic, but not any after that. I like it enough, that I'm going to read it even if there are no more...which is a little unlike me. I like to have the stories I read "finished." But when one is as interesting and well-written as yours, I have no problem enjoying myself immensely anyway! Thanks for writing and for sharing it. :)
Smoochy
2008-12-17 . chapter 16
You are so great and talented! I am so in love with your writing style! Perfect written characters and very in character. I really haven't read anything as nice as this before, it did make me worry for Hermione and Sirius and for their relationship. I do hope you will never stop writing cuz you're too talented! :)
Only one thing - it seems like Hermione is a bit to mature for her age, but really - she only 13 and still she thinks like a complete grown-up!
But aynway i kied this way even more cuz its more interesting :)
Keep creating - a wonderful story!
Multitaskmom
2008-11-28 . chapter 2
I am very intrigued with this story. I love Hermione/Sirius stories (as I've mentioned to you before). It is always fun for me to find a talented author with more than one story for me to indulge in.
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