Noooooooooooooo! This is so sad. D: In a good way, argh, stupid ninjas chopping onions in my room...

Who is the first most perfect woman in the world that Ichigo saw?

wow

Amazing. Very sad and angsty and just GOOD. Keep up the awesome work.

I'll say, it is well written. I like the morbidity. The thing is... it's just a snip-it of something much bigger...

Gah! That was...-splutters- amazing! Your imagery needs no improving at all, my friend.

... very sad.

Curious though... you say "second most perfect woman"... is the first his mother?

Anyway... very angsty (which is great!).

SS

It's beautiful. Bloody depressing and beautiful at the same time.

Insanely good drabble. The imagery is perfect..almost painful, in fact. I can actually feel Ichigo's feelings..Lovely job!

Short but so powerful. Loved it!

Oh dear. So beautifully written. I LOVE the imagery and I can honestly feel the weight of the words. It's amazing that you can write something so short and make it remarkably emotional...

Kudos!

OMG this is morbid and angsty and so so awesome. And that line: "Rukia is a dying butterfly spread out for dissection, a goddess with no more believers, the only teacher who ever knew anything that was worth learning". Just beautiful.

extraordinary ! very beautiful !

This is really good. It sorts of reminds me of the story i had to write for la class (It was in a similar style). The descriptions were flawless. Now i'm going to look through the rest of your work.

-lij

aw

i liked it a lot!