Oh dear. So beautifully written. I LOVE the imagery and I can honestly feel the weight of the words. It's amazing that you can write something so short and make it remarkably emotional...

Kudos!

OMG this is morbid and angsty and so so awesome. And that line: "Rukia is a dying butterfly spread out for dissection, a goddess with no more believers, the only teacher who ever knew anything that was worth learning". Just beautiful.

extraordinary !! very beautiful !

This is really good. It sorts of reminds me of the story i had to write for la class (It was in a similar style). The descriptions were flawless. Now i'm going to look through the rest of your work.

-lij

aw
i liked it a lot!

Reading this again reminds me why I love your stories so much. Sure, you haven't updated on this site in forever, but rereading your stories is still awesome.

Just little details you use in your story, like how Ichigo describes Rukia as "the second most perfect woman" as a "goddess with no more believers"

you just feel it man, you feel the weight of these words.

Gargh. Angsty... (dies)

Wow. This was a beautifully written fic. It was short, but it was great nonetheless. I really enjoyed reading it.

amazing. I love the clip. Pitiful though:D

That's really good !

excellent description without conversation and the meaning is brought out perfectly. beautiful fic, in a sad way.

Gentle and perfect in that 'nothing more to do' kinda way. I really like it.

this made me go "aww" in a sad sort of way... T_T doesn't really make the face I want it too..

beautiful imagery, though very sad.

that was awesome. I could imagine how Ichigo was watching her, every single detail, sudden realizations dawning upon him.