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| Falling Right Side-Up 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. I really like the IchiRuki pairing, but this introspective conundrum was nice. |
| SeikoTuNeR 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseTo call it an oedpius complex is rather extreme, don't you think? Rukia may feel like his mother, but as it is stated, it is one sided. Ichigo clearly knows who is own mother is. And its not her. And she sure as hell never behaves like a mother. |
| craziestanimefan 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseOh gods, Oedipus... my English teacher was telling us the backgroud of Antigone, and then she got into detail...yeah, not the greatest story out there. Anyways, very interesting fic. I've never thought of it that way (and I probably will still be a die-hard IchiRuki shipper), but it was an interesting fanfic to read. Kudos! |
| miss-emotive 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThis story is a prime example of what most of is missing: complexity and proper use of grammer. I cannot express in words how much I loved this story. The age difference between Rukia and Ichigo (although one could assume that Rukia's age is the shinigami equivalent to being fifteen or so) makes a great point to play on in stories, and her maternal feelings for him are made even more plausible because of it. The bittersweet-ness of this piece is just... so damn good. Thank you for such an amazing piece! |
| Maiden-Chan 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseOh, I liked it. A lot. It's almost disturbing, becaues it's there's this common belief that IchiRuki is a set-in-stone pairing. And it probably is. But for a fanficiton, this outlook is much more fun. ;) Anyway, it's beautifully written and it brings to light a new facet of their relationship to think about (it's so sweet - and interesting - to think of Ichigo as a child, compared to the shinigami). Definately a great fic. ^_^ |
| LoquaciousQuark 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseThat's brilliant. The ending is really sharp and hard. I love it. |
| vampirelf 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abusethe ending shot me dead, it did. *rolls* |
| Lyhtning 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI can see why some people reject Ichiruki for this reason: age difference. But...if you've caught up with the recent anime, it strongly suggests Ichiruki together. Age is of no problem for them. After all, it's already been overcome, as it is revealed in the anime...and isn't there any speculation that Ichigo is actually a shinigami? *shrugs* Maybe that's just my take... Meh. I don't really agree with the whole Rukia-mother thing. But nice fict anyways! X3 |
| Esbee 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. Well written and poignant. I'm neither here nor there about Ichigo/Rukia, so I think this is a very plausible look at their relationship. Great job |
| Emiko87 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseaw |
| Trumpet-Geek 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseOh God, Oedipus... Lol... That was a TERRIBLE situation. I read it in English class and when we got to the part where Oedipus married his mother the whole class was like ...EW... But anyway, I really liked this. Especially the last two lines. |
| Miiko Ashida 2007-06-10 ch 1, | abuseThose last few lines were just amazing. They were juxtaposed with one another perfectly. It created a brilliant irony. Great job, yet again! |
| Pixagi 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAwe, poor, poor Rukia. -pets- At least so far Ichigo hasn't actually *said* it yet, so she can ignore it for a bit longer XD |
| Parisologist 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseOh, yes! Oedipus complex. :) *dances with elation* I liked the second person POV in this. 'Twas lovely. (Renata) |
| DimLight 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abusei liked it :) but eh, i honestly dont think that rukia sees ichigo as a son or anything like that since she did kinda like that kaien guy or whatever his name was and ichigo resembles him like crazy so blah but still, i really loved this fic :) keep up the great work ^_^ |