Ouch. This is really an interesting way to view their relationship, and I liked how you put it together. Nice work!

Fantastic.

lol all too true

Love this piece,great job :)

I was very pleased! :" You write beautifully and your was wonderful.

Short and angsty.

I liked it.

I fav cause this is how I see Rukia's feelings towards Ichigo. I honestly think she likes to mother him in a touch, I was part of the marines, type of way. Good story. Nice insight into the IchiRuki relationship.

This is spot on. Definitely how I imagine their dynamics to be.

OMIFREAKINGSHINIGAMI this is one of the best Bleach fics I've read on

Very well done!

SS

incredible its kind of confusing-ish but so is life so i guess that it only makes it more realistic.

That summary dragged me in. x)

This was fantastic; I could easily see Rukia thinking along these lines. It's strange; I guess we tend to forget how much older she is than him.

Awesome work!

interesting idea. i'm not really sure how she feels about him. they get along so well. but this is a nice take on it certainly possible.

Aw, this was nice to read. Imagine if Rukia actually told Ichigo that she wanted to be his motha. I think I'd die of shock laughter asphyxiation.

It's so true how Rukia is sage-like and a mentor, but I ship them nonetheless.

Great job, do you have any recs?

beautiful, like poetry! it touches you down deep, i can only fraze it up in a simple haike (u can use it is chu like)

a first flash of love

a joyful shiver down back

a face meets a face