*sigh* Lovely. _ Don't give up, Remus! Your friends wouldn't want you to give up! Keep fighting! Besides, I'm pretty sure that JKR said Remus would be very important in the 7th book... SO YOU GOTTA HANG ON! Personally, I... well if none of the other Marauders come back, I hope Remus dies at the very very very end, so he can go and be with his friends. _ But the other half of me is screaming, NO DONT EVEN DIE, REMMY! XD;

OH! Freaky. Kinda. I like this one.

My first time ready a HP story... I think the first few lines needs something,I didn't know who was talking...

I was very much drawn in by Remus and her love for Sirus,and the pain and memories of the past.

Remus talking,it had a lot of depth to it...good start...