amusing.

on another note, could you give the magebear the order of your stories? the magebear would like to read your amalgam stories in order, but is unsure where to begin/continue.

I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I really think you should continue the story!

Great little story! Poor Kaname comes across as the paranoid otaku one, coming up with all these anecdotes about military attacks, etc. Well-written and well within character, as always!

Ahh funny ending.

I like the story, but isn't Kaname a little OOC? Sure she's not exactly the soul of calm, but she's not THAT hysterical. She's annoying enough to get on my nerves, not a bad achievement, considering that it's text.

Lol! I totally lmao when i read this, i could tell it was actually Chidori who had problems :P. You should so update/continue this ASAP!

I kind of saw that coming. The most interesting aspect of your fics is the thoroughness of any facts presented. I'm uncertain if you research facts and/or ideas you present in your fics but it certainly seems that way. It seems to show talent as well as intelligence. Keep up the good work...

Good comedic timing and excellent characterization. You certainly know your subjects well. This is an exceptionally entertaining fic.

OMG! I've spent ALL day reading your fics! Never done that before. Thank you for sharing your work with us untalented readers.

Dear Dave-D,

Probably the best fan fic I have read on this web site. The characters are true to form, the plot is simple and yet involving and the feelings of love and hate between Kaname and Sousuke is brilliantly interchanged.

Please write more stories.

Lesserpawn (aka Andrew Richardson)

P.S. Class Act was also superb!

*Shrieks of laughter* Please, do continue on this one, Dave-d. Hilarious...absolutely cute and hilarious.

This story has so much potential. The way you made it clear that Kaname was causing problems that could easily be avoided if she would simply stop attacking Sousuke. It would be great if Kaname got some of the help she needs. Anyway the story could be great.

Great ending! Kaname's reaction was priceless! Well done! You obviously did research on ink blot tests! Very humorous

This was great! Sousuke at a psychiatrist's office? My favorite quotes were:

"Kyouko was glad she had brought her camera to gym class. Kaname was trying to pull a metal bar off of the wall. She was grunting like a boar going full tilt after a truffle."

and

"Unfortunately, many of her suggestions are anatomically impossible or at odds with my assigned missions."

Keep up the good work!

I enjoy the premises, the references to psychological terms. I disliked the vulgar Kaname you seem to have described and confused as Sousuke's apathy. Did Season 1 and 2 ever had her so brutish?

Muahahaha! Poor Kaname... I like the phsyco-cologist. He's cool. I feel sorry for him though, having to test them...Anyhoo, muahaha!