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Iceblade423
2008-06-11 . chapter 10
Well, there were a few inaccuracies...and no, not with the Mythology...with a few of the SM attacks (mainly Love and Beauty Shock) and the fact that they were using each others names while in Senshi form.

Otherwise, the story was very good and thoroughly enjoyable. I found it extremely entertaining, amusing, intriguing, and intellectual (what with all the mythology). The mythology was incorporated very effectively into the story and the SM characters were depicted very accurately (again, even though this was before Crystal Points).

I really like all of the Poseidon, Hermes, and Ami scenes (which is pretty much the whole thing). The lack of powers also made the story more original. Also, all of it was well-written, and I really enjoyed the pairing of Hermes and Ami.

The comedy and oh my gosh moments (which happens a lot with Ames) were excellently placed and very amusing. This story had a lot of water in it, so that is an extra plus (just check my username).

Okay, now I am babbling. Anyway I really liked this story, but it is a shame that this is the last of these SM stories by yours.

Well, good day.
SMFan423
diff-r-ent-1
2008-02-27 . chapter 10
this story was just so awesome! i love mercury(the sailor) and she and hermes are such a cute couple!! i so hope they'll see each other again. ^_^
My One Hope
2006-07-15 . chapter 10
I absolutely love this story! It's beautifully written, and I'm glad that I stumbled across it. As the story is years old, I realize that there is almost no chance of a sequel... HOWEVER, I wish you'd consider it!
elianthos
2006-06-20 . chapter 10
*dancing around and flashing 'V' sign* I've rummaged through my posts archive and found out the review ^_^.

So, here it is, L-chan.

'I found your Amy's Odissey pretty good most of the time, and very (VERY) good in some paragraphs, like the ones descripting Athena, the meeting and talk with Elissa, and all the Ithaka section. Setting and characters were charming and believable, and Ami's interaction with them sounded just o-so-right.
The symbolism about Medusa was so cool ( ah ah, what a subtle adjective...). And it's so true. Everything being a flowing, a stream, an hidden armony: something that most of traditional wisdom and religions used to know very well, from Greece to Japan, from paganism to Christianism. From Homer to Eraclito (is it 'Heraclitus' in English? ) to Plato (yes, even him, who claimed to separate the spiritual world from the material), to Dante, to Marion Zimmer Bradley to... Naoko Takeuchi.
My favourite scene(s): the final fight against Poseidon, and, first place, Ami playing and singing Dante's Prayer. You've tied together smoothly all the different traditions and sources in them: there's a feeling of total connection: time, people, feeling, knowledge.'

Oh, yes. I love this fic every time I re-read it. And I wish more people here could know about it and read it. Well, I'm working on this >3 L-chan.
n^x
2005-09-25 . chapter 10
Waugh, I love this fic. I've read it about three times now, and I'm still amazed. :D You rule.
Stephy-sama
2004-11-09 . chapter 10
Wow. I mean, wow. What I'm trying to say is...wow. Yeah. In a sea of ramblings and badly-written epistles, you're writings are truly a refuge! You actually got stoic little me to squeal like a fan-girl when Hermes kissed Ami-chan at the end. Congratulations. Heh, please keep writing, my faith in otaku-ism depends on it!
meeh2
2004-06-07 . chapter 10
I LOVE this story!
U are such an awesome author...
Ami is my favorite scout and I like how you didn't put her OOC and ur just an awesome author!
regie27
2004-03-22 . chapter 10
Wow! Finally an author gets Mythology right in a fanfic! For a enthusiastic fan of Greek and Roman mythology who has also tried to include it in her work (in my case Soul Calibur), this is a great tale that shows why the old myths are timeless.
This story is quite a remarkable work great in all aspects. The story is solid, the characters are excellently well portrayed, vocabulary is top-notch, well integrated within its fandom, in summary, just excellent. I've read other fics that tried to integrate the mythology behind the planets the Senshi represent but the results were sadly dissapointing, so it was indeed most pleasant to stumble upon your fine work. Even if you wrote this years ago, the recent reviews prove that a good story lives on. You just gained another reader! Again, kudos on a work well done.
nova33
2004-03-09 . chapter 10
you are my favourite author ever
i actually read ami's oddessey on another site, along with crystal points
your knowledge of history and mythology amazes me
this fic inspired me to read the oddessey myself (though i havent gotten through it yet)
i am currently reading the dreamweaver series, it is very good and i really like kami
please please please please please write a sequel to ami's oddessey!
i want to see what happens with ami and hermes, they are such a cute couple ^ - ^
thanks for writing such great fics!
Sailor Element
2003-04-02 . chapter 10
Wow... OMG I just read this in school.. (It took me 4 1/2 hoursto read. Myteacher syas that this is some of the best writing she has ever seen. The wa you used the quotes and stuff I think she is in shock... I loed every minute of it. And I hope that maybe if at all possible you could write a little sequal... I know some sequals make it worse but My teacher and my self find your writing just perfect and we hope you have a happy and long life.

Ja Ne... Alana
Lady of Pluto
2002-10-14 . chapter 10
this is a really good story with good aspects of love and plot design.
Adyen
2002-10-11 . chapter 10
I remember reading this a long time ago... And it's just as good as I remember it! I hope you write more good stories for people like me to read! (^_^ I'm a somewhat compulsive reader...)
GreyAB
2002-10-10 . chapter 10
This is a fantasic story (and not just because Ami is my favorite SM character ;), you had really done your homework for this one I can tell, it shows in what you have written. :)

If this is a sample I shall definatly be looking for more stories by you.
riskygamble
2002-09-25 . chapter 9
AAAAAAAAAAAUGH! Why are you so GOOD!? I really enjoyed this story, Queen... And because of it, I'll be heading over to the bookstore later today to find a book on Greek history. Thanks for a great read!
Slice
2002-07-22 . chapter 9
AAAHH! Hermes kicked! Oh my gosh!! I loved it so much! I wanted more mush and sap and fluff but it was okay! My God that was beautiful!! I LOVED IT!!! *sob* *sniffle* Hermes so totally rocked, he's so cool! But...what happens to him? PLEASE SPILL!!
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