Man, the way you get so much into character with Kratos' thoughts is really awesome. Are you sure you aren't one of the Four Seraphim? -eyesballs- Namco could do so much more with ToS like this, an alternate story playing the game from Kratos' point of view. They'd make so much money! Anyway, I'll be reading the rest, I'm hooked!

Noo! No cliffie!! *cries*

I really hope you update soon! Although I'm not a big fan of the slightly developing Raine x Kratos (don't know what the results of that poll was), I'll still read to the end! =P I'm looking forward to seeing how Kratos' memory loss is going to affect him in the future and why it happens. Yuan gave a hint, but still... =D

Hope you update soon! Thanks for the story!

Heh, I can totally see Yuan and Kratos sitting on a ledge looking on like a pair of young boys. Of course, they're men and thus angsty, but the image is now stuck in my brain. Great job!

O! This story is at such a good part! Please update again soon!

great chapter! i wanna read on! please, pleeaase, go on with the story soon!

I've been reading your stories (well, so far only this one) for 9 chapters so far and I LOVE it! You portray Kratos so perfectly! When I saw that Katz village part I just *had* to say this: sheer brilliance! :D Keep writing!

i love this story! Oh i can't wait until you update.

Oh Kratos. I guess turning 40 does some things to your memory. I love how he's totally being senile. XD It's hilarious. As was Yuan shrieking like a teenage girl when Kratos got blood on his scarf. Aha, that was great.

Anyway, I love how you just have to leave it off at Lloyd's reaction. Oh noes! I haven't played the game in so long that I forgot how he reacted, so now I'm freaking out all over again!

I just bought DotNW, but I haven't had time to play it yet. I'm almost scared to start, actually. Also, I'm scared to hear the new VAs for the original cast. And then there's the fact that Kratos isn't really in the game. =( There are so many things making me cringe that I don't want to touch it yet. Oh well, I'll probably pick 'er up during my winter break. Until next time!

Oh yes, this and the next chapter are the ones I've been waiting with great excitement ! : D Lloyd discovering (with help of Yuan) Kratos' true identity as his father is absolutely one of the most interesting and mysterious scenes in the game, and also one of my absolute favourites. And now I got to read it (well, part of it :'D) !

Firstly, this is great :D ! As always, I laughed a lot while reading this (it was just too cute when Kratos didn't remember the mana fragments and then began to walk to the wrong direction, Yuan being like 'you really have a problem'). I still can't describe how much I love your writing style, but I have to apologize, 'cause I think I say this every time I review. And I don't want to only repeat the things I have said earlier, so I hope this'll be the last time I say it :'D. Besides, your writing style doesn't change so much so it's only stupid to repeat the exact same thing every time ! So when I next time don't compliment your writing style, I still love it to death

NO! I didn't want it to end there! AH! But I love how you did the backstage scene with Yuan poisoning Kratos. I think that would do the trick. I've seen a few interpretations, and I like this one the best. Go Yuan! (not really...)

But I'm still deeply in love with this story, so keep up the work.

BTW: my brother finished the new game. He said he loved it! I won't play it...no Kratos :(

Kratos Wilder

Oh I love how you add humor into this story! It's just got everything. But the humor gets me! OH I love it!

I would say more and should say more, but there is another chapter waiting for me! YES!

Kratos Wilder

>u< This scene is one of my absolute favourites in the game, and you did an amazing job pulling it off. Your drama is so stunningly thought out - it makes me reread over parts again and again. So, well done, and thanks sosososo much for the update. *u*

It's so nice to read this story again... It is as good as ever! :) I do hope you finish the sequel soon then! It is a good game, but a lot simpler than the first story-wise. Keep up the great writing!

Thank you for the update! This story is sweetness.

And ToS: Dawn of the New World is awesome, I beat it a couple days ago and am already a few hours into a second playthrough...

Have fun, and keep writing!

Nice chappie. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Happy writing :D

Alaia Skyhawk