deeply beautiful insight into zelgadis' mind. A++

Whoah, very nice. Impressively done. I've never seen such a rhyme scheme... but the meter seemed a little strange. You're a good poet: keep it up.

Very cute. Good job ^_^.

It would seem that our views on imagining are different, but then, I never really cared for poems that could be songs. You know why? Because of choruses. They repeat themselves, but it never says anything new. That's why I prefer actual stories.

But still, yours wasn't all that bad.
~Knight of L-sama