Aha.

So there ARE some decently funny Snape/Hermione pairings out there! Where have you been hiding my friend?

But, down to business. I'm quite sickened by the SS/HG pairing, yet this one is particularly hilarious. Maybe it's the shortness, or maybe it's the fact there isn't a homework question that turns into a steamy makeout session. Whichever it is, it works for you!

Not cliche at all. I find that quite refreshing.

I'm rather drawn to the first one. I like her 'faint look of revulsion'. Too bad it had to come from a challenge, though, I would have liked to see what you could have done with this idea and more words :)

Love your style. I rarely find a decent story so perfectly worded as this. Wonderful! Just wonderful! (no sarcasm, really!)

All in all, while I don't like the pairing, I love your style and ability to use grammar, so, kudos!

A rose for you, my dear!
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-NSIF

I like the 2nd better. Pink and Severus, thats a funny piture!

i love them both...but the second one was funnier! great job!

Aw... I can't believe you made Hermione reject Snape. Especially when he was so brave to let her know how he felt. :( *sniff* But it was cute and I loved it.

As to the second one... it's my favorite. He he. :D Pink??

(ooh, have you read my story called: That Hideous Colour?)

har har. Brilliant. Great job.

Hahahah. xD Very Cute. I think I've read this on Ashwinder before...but nonetheless very good.

Te He He. This definately made me laugh out loud. Great!

Great story. I enjoyed reading it.

Hmm, definately like the second one, just because I feel so sorry for Severus in the first one.

Definately love the last line.

*smiles at the ficcy* That was very sweet and funny in the gentle way--does that even make sense? Anyways, good job.

Nicely done..

This is probably the general concensus, but I much prefer the second one. It's funny and it ends happily. The first one is more realistic (even as an ardent HGSS shipper, I find it hard to imagine them liking each other during her school years), but this is fiction! It can BE unrealistic! HA! Yeah...I'm done now. Anyway, good job!

lol i love the second version...made me laugh out loud

Very nicely done
Barbi

heehee...this made me laugh...both of them...thaks...

~Merlana~