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caligrl479
2008-02-01
ch 7,
abusegreat story, i hope u update soon
ILuvTommyJude21
2007-12-16
ch 6,
abusequestion: wouldnt this make mr del rossi evrythin he doesnt want marco 2 b?
shirilyle
2007-06-25
ch 7,
abusei like it keep it up
Briticism
2007-02-05
ch 7,
abuseIs there any particular reason you haven't updated this?? It is/was good!
Briticism
2007-02-05
ch 1,
abusehey, it's good, basically, but you could do with out the authors notes in the middle of your writing. the stuff about 'like in that 70s show'. That's very unprofessional and there's so many other ways to write it, without referencing another show and having to authors note. It's a fiction, not a screenplay. Other than that, it's good and you seem to have good natural talent for this.
MarcoLover16
2006-12-23
ch 3,
abuseaH. That was very scary. I really like it, though, despite the fact that it's a little out there, but that's good. I know what you mean. I've been writing fanfiction since I was like ten, and still can't figure out how to use italics and stuff like that.
missmiamya
2006-04-06
ch 7,
abusereview for you half of the story!

1:Good Chapter...A little fast paced, but still good!
2: Grr...You cut off at good/bad parts...know what I mean?!...lol It was good though!
3:Aww sick! I knew his father hated him being gay, but Rape?!...I really hope his father pays for it!
4:INTENSE! I would be extatic if that would actually happen in real life *just come back to life* I watched my dad die on a hospital bed a little over a year ago.
5:Good Chapter! I'm glad Marco told Dylan what happened
6: Why must you be so evil?!...Cliffhangers suck for readers...That really can't be good Did his parents know he was at Dylans?!
7: I can't believe he cut his arm! Obvious there! I hope everything works out with his dad being charged and found guilty...guess I read the continuation next...lol since I found that first and came here to read the beginning. Good so far!
Thayet-Victoria
2006-03-07
ch 7,
abuseHey I just read your fic from start to finish and i loved it. I cant wait for the next update. Just so you know, it's not providences here in Canada, its Provinces. Providence is like fate. Anyway, as for your poll, I think it'll be Ellie and someone. I dunno who. Maybe ash although she seems a little too man obsessed. Can't wait for your next update
Sirius15894
2006-01-02
ch 1,
abusePositivly brilliant!
RandomAvocados
2005-06-29
ch 6,
abusethis is really good! update soon! Please!
SILVERFOX KTREVA
2005-05-23
ch 7,
abusethis is a great story hurry up with the next chaptor
mellowyellow36
2005-04-15
ch 7,
abusedibbs on ellie!I like this alot,this is cool, good job!

~Kay
tntiggris
2005-03-20
ch 7,
abuseActually alot of people think ellie/Paige which I find kinda freakish but of well i read Paying for it continued before I read this and I love this caue I love my fave characters being tortured =]
ciao
~*~T of TNT
By the way did I mention how much I love this fic
I Highly recommend this story to others.
Scarlett Moonchild
2005-02-03
ch 6, anon.
abuseLMAO! I HAD to review and tell u how hilarious i thought it was when Paige made Dylan's wood disappear! HAHAHAHAHA. "Yeah, Paige would have that effect on anyone." LMAO! Priceless!!

Loving this story, btw.
Hepcat8089
2004-12-26
ch 7,
abuseHeyheyhey, these are good-alitous stuffin's all wrapped up in bacon fried batter sauce! ( thats a good thing) I think that Marco should refuse to testify against his dad.( I hate happy endings... im totally kidding) but still, it's a silly thing... I dont know why. I like how it's about Marco and Dylan, because they are cool. I think that Paige was a little foward-ly out of charecter ( however you spell that) like when she was all: let me see your arm... and stuffins... I feel bad for her, because she's so left out.
I think you should continue with this, because you sould... and KILL EVERONE OFF! wow, no, please don't do that, that would be terrible! I'm such a horrible person, but II LOVE ANGST! in this fanfiction crap. so you should have someone (good) beat up, or somthing, its late, and therefore I'm too lazy to accually think of something to happen.yep.
I dont think that there will EVER BE another homosexual person, on Degrassi, and I hope there isnt, because then It would take the "limelight" away from MARCO... and DYLAN < Marco is so much cooler, tho, and I think he should be in more Episodes of Degrassi, but that's just me>
I think that Sean should randomly appear, because WE ALL LOVE SEAN RIGHT? < a bunch of people yell stuff like " yeah", "you know it!" and " YAHOO!!". I also think that Spinner should be there, cuse I love spinner. I CANNOT BELIEVE HE GETS EXPELLE- I mean, oh dear, I wonder wht happens next in your American lovely The-N Televisition censored sets which involve Spinner and the aftermath of what he indirectly did to Jimmy? Oh dear! lets just WAIT AND FIND OUT!!T, no, I'm totally American,I just Get Degrassi frm Canada, and spend half my life there... oh well.
Im totally getting off topic now, all my reveiws are totally randomly off topicly long. I like Sean. hes hott. I wish my BF looked like Sean... wow, totally off topi*c. im sorry about that. So I'll leave y'all alone for a while, but you can probobly expect, If you EVER continue this LOVELY story, that I shall reveiw YET AGAIN!
-Melissa**
** Yes I reveiwed before!
* Craig is hott too
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