yo that was a good chapter man

YES YES YES
Of course you should continue everyone wants to see Carters reaction to Misty's new b/f *giggles* they make such a cute couple. What if some press person caught them kissing and Carter saw the picture in the newspaper, wouldn't it be fun when she returned *giggles evily* Sorry getting carried away here but you must continue or face my wrath!
He-Yan ^_^ x

This is a cute and sad story. Please continue. Ash and Misty forever.

I think you should continue that story! If you don't, I won't read ANY stories by you! EVER AGAIN! I will ALWAYS-no NEVER read your stories again if you quit this story! I need to find out what happens to Misty and Carter, and Ash and Misty! Duh! I NEED TO KNOW! AH!
Sorry. I lost control. Just write the stinkin' rest of the story!
TTFN
Katie ^_~

Luv it very much...please continue! ^_^

I Love it very much...

Continue! It's so cute!

Cute! Loved it. Just make the chapters longer, aiight.

This story rocks and Keep at it Your very Good the story is Very good and Keep writing

Your Fan DS23

Yes! Continue! The world needs more good twerpshipping fan fictions like this one.

keep going! its really sweet... poor misty tho... caught between responsibility, integrity and love

YES! YES YOU WILL CONTINUE AND IF YOU DON'T I'LL MURDER YOU! =D

I love pokemon, and i have seen alot of stories about Ash and Misty. Only one was good. not even the pros can create a story about these two that actually makes sense. The way you write...i must say, not bad at all for a first timer. I am a beginner myself, and i understand why you think this sucks (which it does not)
The time period is perfect, and ash and misty are in character. Thank you, you have inspired me to work on a Ash/Misty story, because i had NO IDEAS before i read this.
Sorry if this review is too long. i just have one more thing to say.
The pros...the way they wrote about Ash and Misty...i'm sorry to say, their stories stunk. No offense to pros...anyways, great for a starter.
I love it. Please continue.

please continue.

That was how you say interesting.
I have read alo, and I mean alot, of fanfic and have to say for your first try that was great. I hope to read more of your story in the near futur.
Your Friend,
kathy128