i like it i thought it was ineresting

just so you know am not going to use everythin about your revew withgirl94116 its rose am going to use some of it not all and harry go a sister in a nether story that i havent finsht

I loved it.

I really enjoyed your fan fiction, you did a really good job. It is nice to see people using their imagination when writing. Good luck with any more to come.

DUDE! Very nice, very nice. It's kinda sad though. Gimme more!

You probably could have made it a bit longer; it seemed sort of rushed. But it was a good story. Nice job.

Estra, estra good. Loved it! It was also very very sad, but well, writen.Do more !