A beautifully written story, that contrasts the "Angel from my nightmarish story of DOOM" fic you also wrote (which I just reread a few minutes ago). Work well done, and I hope to see more from you in the future.

M.. Agony.

So this is the flip side of Dib's unappreciated heroic altruism.

Almost no fics ever bother to hand Gaz any kind of richly deserved comeuppance, so when I look at this one as trying to balance out all the rest, its ending suddenly doesn’t seem so overboard.

hey love,
ironic this one. almost made me cry. love it. also coz its short and sweet.

Bwah! That was great! I like how you chose to write it in a poetic format, it truly adds to the starkness of the situation. The narrator's antipathy really draws the reader's attention in. Bravo.

-The Sheep [Or the Loop E. It's a matter of preference.]

Wow, that was a great ** story! Lovely twist at the end.

this was pretty freaking good...even tho I def guessed what was going on about 2 paragraphs in, but thats just cos my mind is twisted like that. but pretty freakin good, all the same.

Um...wow. That was kind of scary...but good scary. The title really does seem fitting; I like it. Stop worrying about writing too many sad stories, you're good at them and sad stories are what make the world go round. Yep, Dib terrorizing the people he tried to hard to save...fun idea.