 Sousukes-Girl 9/27/07 . chapter 6Amazing story, I really loved it! I can't get anough of your fics. Keep writing S&K ones! |
 MommyRogers 11/29/06 . chapter 6Hm. And I thought you did Naruto well. Your characterizations of Sousuke and Kaname are brilliant. In the preludes to this fic I also especially appreciated Shunya and Oichi. Usually OC's make my teeth hurt; but yours I *like*. Wow. Write more in this vein please? |
 Grey Wolf4 9/22/06 . chapter 6This is a great story, very gripping and reminds me a bit of the Running man. |
 Ishkabod 6/17/06 . chapter 6well miracle do happen and i still am wide awake after 3hrs of sleep in 48hrs. so in other words please forgive rambling and spelling errors. Anywo THANKS AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN and of course THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for this story which is yet another example of why i need to stop reading your stories for today so i can get some sleep. They are just to good. ENERGY DRINK HERE I COME. AH that was good now i'm ready for the next one so bring it on. HAVE FUN AND THANKS AGAIN and again and again.
Ishkabod
P.S. THANK YOU
P.P.S. It's called XS energy drink in case you were wondering and damn they taste good. No calories or sugar either. Yum.
P.P.P.S. THANK YOU AGAIN AND AGAIN and in case you might have forgotten HAVE FUN too. |
 animearlinefreak 2/24/06 . chapter 6Heh, that was cute. This seemed to me just how the series would be if they made this one. You are a good writer. I hope you will always be! Bye! |
 TimothyLim 1/7/06 . chapter 6woot good story! But the PSG-1? There's a military version which is pretty much the same but lighter and slightly better, MSG-90! oh well. |
 TimothyLim 1/6/06 . chapter 2all right! time for these guys to get a bit blown to bits by sousuke, they underestimate him! |
 Onienigma 10/27/05 . chapter 6I dont know if u continued this chain of this story...ill check after this...this was another well written story...the cold-blooded nature of Sousuke at the end showed how he had been developing, and Kaname's reactions were good and still in character.. hope there is more to this... |
 MichaelCross 9/24/05 . chapter 6Very entertaining story. Loved every bit of it. Any chance of having Kaname and Sousuke telling her family all about their ordeal and have Kalinin, Mao and Weber along for the ride when they go back for Mr. Chidori's wedding? I'm sure they'd be interested in meeting Kaname's family. Yeah, power tools and guns rock! |
 Jack D 9/15/05 . chapter 6I've just finished reading Christmas Cakes, Guess Who's Coming to Dinner and now The Most Dangerous Game and I just have to tell you how much I've enjoyed them.
These three stories have allowed Sousuke and Kaname's characters to expand and grow without loosing site of the original feel and flavor of the series.
Your story lines are engaging and well paced making it almost impossible not to keep reading just to find out what happens next.
I look forward to reading some of your other works soon.
Keep up the Good Work!
Jack D |
 Zefrn 6/22/05 . chapter 6Great story! Very compelling and wrought with sacrifices. I feel that this part of the story isn't complete though. Perhaps you need to add an epilogue to it or something. It just feels.. unfinished.
Can't wait to read more on this timeline. |
 shawna 5/28/05 . chapter 6 YEAH! Great fic! |
 schizohidaka 5/3/05 . chapter 6I don't know what to say about this. I enjoyed it quite a bit! |
 tipi 2/20/05 . chapter 6 hello! i love all ur stories and i just wanted to give 2 big thumbs up! i was also wondering if there is anymore to this story? keep up the great and wonderful work! |
 Ann 1/3/05 . chapter 6 Your story is THEY best! I'v never read anyting quite as good as this! I've read some of your other stuff too you are an awsome writer!
By the way, is the story finished or are you going to add some more, pplease let me know, if it isnt an inconvienance.
Thanks |