I really enjoyed this fic. Great writing!

Interesting idea. Could be more description on locations, and maybe it was just me but I didn't completely follow the story so far. What are Harry's motives?

lol! i love it, The boy is supposed to save us. lol

Oh, that was such a nice ff, a like this kind of mpreg - you didnt concentrate on it so overlly that it seemed weird like all other mpregs. I loved this story!

This was beyond amazing! I love the whole MindGaurd storyline! I also like that it started out as a playful fic, and got really serious, at first I thought it would be like many other Snarry mpregs, however this one is very unique and really damn awesome!

this was a pretty good fic. i liked the idea, but there were many parts that were difficutl to understand, and there were some inconsistencies that threw me off. like i said, i really liked it, and i think you have a lot of talent. maybe you should consider finding a beta reader to help a little?

need... more... *wheeze* *cough* more... more... update... more... love... Snape.. as... slave... argh! NED!

Nicely done, a bit fast for my taste but the ending is wonderful

Lots of great ideas, original plot. I'm glad you completed the story.

amazing

good

Wonderful Story!!

Perfect ending to an awesome story! I look forward to reading any new stories you may write.

That was a sweet story -- I am a sucker for happy endings. Thanks for keeping my boys together. *grin*

Aw! Love it!