aw how sweet.

OK,I am really having a dificult time finding to improve in this story.I read all the time but this is seriously one of the best stories I have read latley in fact it is only second to Stephenie Meyers books.There are eight people in my house and I read the most out of all of them and I really needed something good to read and I looked at mabey six to eigh other sites and stories before coming across yours and I have to say it's the best.LUV YA!Pleas keep writing so i can keep reading.BYE!

aw so sweet

O, romance. Nice

Ah, the fun of water. Aw, Legolas didn't get to be as evil. Darn. Oh well, keep it up!

Evil Aragorn! *tries to glare, gives up, giggles like a maniac* Indeed, poor Leggy.
Legolas: *not saying anything. Very pointedly not saying anything*
Gimli: You like gay couples, don't you.
Not got any problem with it, especially if both are hot. Do u agree?

How would he deal with sleeping so close to him? I can think of a few ways...
Legolas: You are NOT only 13.
Am so. I'm just over-mature.
Gimli: Mature? As if!
There's a reason I don't agree with him much.

Heh, looming up. My sister does that too,and it always makes me laugh. I have never said this before, and may never again, but...Go Gimli!
Gimli: The world must be coming to an end.

Hmm...Leggy+Gimli pair up in the book, so they could try a three-way!
Legolas: You really have nothing better to do, do you.
No, and I can't read angst to much without trying to cheer stuff up with crazy ideas!
Gimli: They're crazy all right!

Poor elfy dude. Those two are going to dance circles around each other for a while, aren't they.

Wow it sux to be him.I know, from personal experience.
Aragorn: Of being me?
No, of being lovesick.

Sux to be him.

Awkward moment there. Wow, that's an awesome story.

It was a wonderful story!
My only suggestion is to give a little more detail - like how you describe Aragorn in Legolas's eyes... give the whoel chapter that same feel of beautiful words.

I loved the story..I hope there is more...when I read the part where Aragorn was playing with Legolas...I was turned on completly!!>< FINALLY it comes out into the open...Oo...T.T..I cried..I was so freaking happy...thank you so much for this I LOVED IT please keep on writing!