This was delightful, to say the least.

The world of fandom needs more fics like these-simple, well written, and in character.

The coffee in a tankard comment made me laugh.

Very awesome :) I was hooked until I read the last word, which is normally hard to make me do xD

I love the way this was written. It flowed well, while not being too calm- it still managed to make me giggle out loud.

Roy has terrible manners XD

LOL!! Quite an enjoyable read. A bit pedantic and wordy in some parts, but overall, I really enjoyed the sardonic tone. You said this was supposed to be serious...I saw it as much more humorous than serious. It's one of the most enjoyable SSBM fics I've ever read. ^^

Question: Did Roy have a lot of caffiene that morning, or is he naturally insane? And what's Marth's problem anyway?
Very weird O.o and very funny. Keep it up!

*claps* Aww, Roy's so cute when he's hyper! Great story! Marth sort of reminded me of Murdoc from The Gorillaz with his attitude, but all the better! And I like how Roy said "I'm not a pryomaniac, I just like fire..." I laugh at that. Who isn't a pyro that doesn't like fire? I'm a pyromaniac, and proud of it! But my science teacher seems to want to keep the fire starting items away from me... Oh well. Great story! cookies for you! ^.^

Too many things to say about this fic...just WOW! Vocabulary gets and A+, grammar and all that gets A, and the humor. A bonified A++!~ Great job! ^_^

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fantastic job, Selah. I can't have read another that could have even came close to the brilliance through simplicity. The trio just aimlessly bickering in a small shoppe... that's gotta be new, and I must say, I love what I read. You're fantastic and I hope you'll keep on writing more stories like this. Intriguing, really!

OmG! That was so funny! Especially with the biscuts *laughing* I like the way you portrayed Roy, but Marth and Link seemed a little too smart. I could see Marthj being smart,he is a prince, but Link grew up in a forest, so I don't think he'd have learned so much. But extremely well written, it seemed professional. Well done.

Ha ha ! Poor Link !

Deep... and meaningful. Loved how marth and Link were very mature...

Um, but isn't mead alcoholic? :is confused:

*sigh*

So, you're leaving. That's really a shame since I JUST discovered your work.

Anyways, this is an excellent piece of work, combining just enough of each little element necessary in a good story (or prose for that matter)

Y'know, I think this story has actually inspired me to start writing again. Mind you, not the ones I've already started. I don't work that way.

In any case, great job on this, and kudos!

Funny story. I like these Link, Marth, and Roy fics, since they are the swordsmen in Melee. I love playing as Link and Marth and my brother likes to be Roy. I think it's funny how uptight Marth is, seeing that he's a prince he'd probably be expected to act that way. Or he probably doesn't and you're just making him OOC, I wouldn't know the difference since I never played any of the Fire Emblem games. Anyway, I think you should write more of these. They're really funny. ^_^

-LunaRyuu

YAY! I love the way you made link. So different from everyone else; they prefer to make him as childish as roy. it doesnt bother me, but it's an enjoyable change. the whole story was great, i loved it very much. bravo!