As someone else once pointed out, all the "fiancées" are violence prone. Also, it needed to be broken into smaller paragraphs. Still, all in all, a very good read.

congratuations on this now i would like to see someone to take this akane and ranma and get them togeter happly (it would not be easy you would need a bit of a smarter nabiki and a kasumi who is not so much an air head but i belive its possable just not easy)

KASUMI GAVE HER THAT MALLET? What was she thinking?

That's the first time I've heard this. Was this in the manga or the series?

I can see how things can go rapidly downhill when the two fathers are involved. A very nice portrayal of what might most likely happen if Ranma and Akane aren't allowed to really get to know each other.

If Nabiki knew they loved each other this much why didn't she DO something about it. Now thanks to her inactions her sister is miserable.

While I admire your work, and really like your other fics, I must say that this isnt your best work, and I would like to know if you are planing to update the other fics or some of them are death

nice... I liked the story, will you be making a sequal? Sounds like it when you said "what are the chances he'll ever come back?" I think that you should make a sequal. The story sounds so unfinished.

-LMG- (Plus, i'm a big Nabiki fan)

Good,

But reformat the story, It's hard to read a huge paragraph!

HIGHLY Depressing!!
Well done , and thought out but HIGHLY Depressing.

UNfortunately I can see just that happening.
Though I am an Akane hater from way back and don't agree with Ranma loving her.
CARING for her yes , loving no , he doesn't even know what love is. Any love he has for her would be of the cross between the variety of the annoying bratty sister who keeps hurting his feelings and the feeling that he MUST love her to keep his honor.
Unless she get's a personality transplant she is FAR to immature to be anyones wife.

Derek The Rogue