This is definately one of the better fanfics I've ever read. I only hope you'll finish the story.

Excellent continuation, although I'm sorry to see that Leila and Jarrod's marriage appears to be ending. It was a difficult relationship to begin with considering Leila's previous involvement with Spock. Now that Selyk and Therov have escaped, I'm wondering if they'll be able to avoid capture. More soon? :)

Wow, a great continuation of your story! The interlocking pieces of the story are well thought out, and I can sense that things aren't going to go as expected for Spock (which may be a good thing since he was headed for a long prison stay). And what is going on with his daughter, Lidia? What the heck is she doing, anyway? Is she really involved with Sumarr now? Yipes, a cliffhanger! I hope for some resolution to my questions soon. :)

So - the plot continues to thicken! How will they all get themselves out of this mess? Looking forward to finding out. :)

I have just discovered your Sarpeidon Chronicles. They are great stories and I am really looking forward to your next installment.

Waiting to see if there is something smuggled in with the chess set. The dialogue between Spock and Kai where Kai is passing on his grandfather's comments seemed... encoded.

Both Spock and his son are up against the wall! Good story development. It will be interesting to see how they get out of their respective predicaments.

Very interesting! Plot thickens! Where's Therov in all this? What does Spock have up his sleeve? What are the purple seedlings? hm. Post more soon!

No! This part has taken a totally unexpected, but delicious turn. Okay, you know now that I'm hopelessly hooked. I need to know "the rest of the story." Please continue!