WOW! this is an absolutely amazing lija story, i am very impressed! the whole idea is a very good one, and everything fits together perfectly. you have very believable characters (laura, benjy etc) and i love the way you portrayed the marauders and lily. it was perfect. thankses!

im a we bit disappointed with the ending, it just could have been a bit more meaningful as opposed to casual. I know it sounds weird but i really wanted it to end with Lily proposing to James, because james has always been the more vested in their relationship while Lily is always stressing the importance of choice so i thought she should propose to almost prove herself or whatever...
Also i really wanted to see one of them eat stinksap. heehe.
But overall, i really really enjoyed this story its given me a newfound love for James, he's just the perfect guy! I can't wait to see what your other stories are like!

i am so glad that thats resolved. though i have to say i thought it was a bit anticlimactic. i expected more anger from James, he was a bit too accepting of what she said, and i think she should have explained more about how she thought that JAmes never really liked her. but yea, that just me...

haha, Mike's perspective of being a ball is hilarious! "I didn't know which way was up." i had never ever thought of that! rofl.

this was such an emotion packed chapter, it was brilliant and im glad that Lily has gotten a good smack on the hand for eveything she's done. Im really curious to see how this story is going to be resolved.

holy crap! Angry james = wow.
I have to say though Lily is acting so immature in this chapter and i sorta just wanna slap her and say 'you aren't an adult, get it?'
and i know she's meant to be immature as a 16 yr betrothed to an adult, but geez i blame everything on her. gr/ lol

i really like the effect of pairing his words with her thoughts/ prepared speech. It was a very nice effect. But i really do wish that Lily could be more confident, its kind of frustrating. But who wouldnt feel flustered and confused around James.. he's so yummy. lol

I feel so sorry for Ben. I hate him and love him all at once. He's sweet but he's not giving up on Lily! gr...

it looks like slowly lily and james are building up their relationship, i hope i havent spoken to soon, but i love them together!

haha, yay, im really happy things were all patched up by the end of the story. i have to say im surprised that lily hasnt asked about their nicknames, goes to shoes how absorbed she is in her own problems.

i'm really enjoying this story, its nicely written. The only problem is that as a harry potter fanfic the level of magic in this story is a bit disappointing, as much as a i love the drama a few spells here and there would be interesting/

wow i really wasnt expecting this to happen. i honestly thought James was in love with her and just being a little pathetic. but i cant wait to see what drama ensues from this development!

hm Lily is annoying me a little with her adamant refusal of James, i mean how can she resist pure perfection.. i really hope James turns up in Hogwarts somehow!

im so impressed with James, all his answers to his questions are just perfect. But that also brings me to my issue, James needs something about him to mix things up in this story. Maybe his being a quidditch star will make all her friends annoying around her or whatever.

oh wow, this regulus thing is a really good twist to the plot and this chapter also reminded me of petunia, why wasnt she in the story earlier. I cant wait to see how she responds to James.