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| Cpt-J-Ss-bonnielass 2006-08-21 ch 1,  | abuseI think is awesome. I just thought I should tell you that. Keep up the awesome work.!:) moon-goddess5 |
| SailorSev 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful... simply beautiful. |
| Miss Eliza Azraelian 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseHe stayed! hE STAYED! hE STAYED! *WHOOPS* Thank you very much for short and sweetness. |
| Lalo 2004-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo so so SO very good for a one-shot. I loved it. It drags you through the mud and gunk, just to make the ending that much brighter and happier and lovelier. Really good. I especially like how you wrote in chronologically with Sev's age increasing steadily, rather then 'and then this happened, then this, and then this'. Yea. Great fic. I mean, this is the entire piece, the "chapter 1" is just for title usage. Not that I wouldn't love for it to me longer, but it makes such a tidy little one-shot. But if you do have an idea where the story would go, please write it and post it, 'cause I'll put myself into a frenzy thinkin' of where this story was heading towards. M. Cheers! Lalo |
| Lalo 2004-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseSo so so SO very good for a one-shot. I loved it. It drags you through the mud and gunk, just to make the ending that much brighter and happier and lovelier. Really good. I especially like how you wrote in chronologically with Sev's age increasing steadily, rather then 'and then this happened, then this, and then this'. Yea. Great fic. I mean, this is the entire piece, the "chapter 1" is just for title usage. Not that I wouldn't love for it to me longer, but it makes such a tidy little one-shot. But if you do have an idea where the story would go, please write it and post it, 'cause I'll put myself into a frenzy thinkin' of where this story was heading towards. M. Cheers! Lalo |
| hipa 2004-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abusenice, very nice. Sorry, I´m bit too tired to say anything more meaningful. But I liked this. |
| Amanda Saitou 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseHI! I loved it, great piece of work and very well written! Hugs! |
| goody2sho 2004-08-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseawe! that was so cute!! |
| silver-sunn101 2004-07-30 ch 1, | abuseVery incharacter look at Sev, which I liked. I like this writing style, I wonder why it scares you? Hmm, if *I* like it then I guess you should be scared after all... Anyways, I liked the end the best. The last six or so sentences^^ :~*~:silver-sunn101:~*:~ |
| fragonknight01 2004-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseQuite good. Thanks for posting. |
| barbarataku 2004-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice job. I hope you have more inside. Thanks for sharing. |
| toostupidforyou 2004-07-30 ch 1, | abuseWrite more to this. It's agreat begging to a story. And if not, at least have HArry's POV. |
| Ruth 2004-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseaaw...that was rather sweet... :) not a substitute for another switched chapter, but still a very good story. i like the way you portrayed Sev..he's just a poor, misunderstood soul realli... :( X |
| Cydah 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abusewonderful piece |
| Saavik13 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abusethis was very well done. it seems simple, but there is a complex layering to it. you can see how deeply sad Severus is, yet see how he's kept a very small part of himself safe and able to hope, even if he won't admit it. And he never did stop understanding, did he? Very very well done. |