 Cpt-J-Ss-bonnielass 2006-08-21 . chapter 1I think is awesome. I just thought I should tell you that. Keep up the awesome work.!:)
moon-goddess5 |
 SailorSev 2006-01-28 . chapter 1Beautiful... simply beautiful. |
 Miss Eliza Azraelian 2005-10-09 . chapter 1He stayed! hE STAYED! hE STAYED! *WHOOPS* Thank you very much for short and sweetness. |
 Lalo 2004-10-11 . chapter 1 So so so SO very good for a one-shot. I loved it. It drags you through the mud and gunk, just to make the ending that much brighter and happier and lovelier. Really good. I especially like how you wrote in chronologically with Sev's age increasing steadily, rather then 'and then this happened, then this, and then this'.
Yea. Great fic. I mean, this is the entire piece, the "chapter 1" is just for title usage. Not that I wouldn't love for it to me longer, but it makes such a tidy little one-shot. But if you do have an idea where the story would go, please write it and post it, 'cause I'll put myself into a frenzy thinkin' of where this story was heading towards.
M.
Cheers! Lalo |
 Lalo 2004-10-11 . chapter 1 So so so SO very good for a one-shot. I loved it. It drags you through the mud and gunk, just to make the ending that much brighter and happier and lovelier. Really good. I especially like how you wrote in chronologically with Sev's age increasing steadily, rather then 'and then this happened, then this, and then this'.
Yea. Great fic. I mean, this is the entire piece, the "chapter 1" is just for title usage. Not that I wouldn't love for it to me longer, but it makes such a tidy little one-shot. But if you do have an idea where the story would go, please write it and post it, 'cause I'll put myself into a frenzy thinkin' of where this story was heading towards.
M.
Cheers! Lalo |
 hipa 2004-08-29 . chapter 1 nice, very nice.
Sorry, I´m bit too tired to say anything more meaningful.
But I liked this. |
 Amanda Saitou 2004-08-12 . chapter 1HI! I loved it, great piece of work and very well written!
Hugs! |
 goody2sho 2004-08-03 . chapter 1 awe! that was so cute!! |
 silver-sunn101 2004-07-30 . chapter 1Very incharacter look at Sev, which I liked. I like this writing style, I wonder why it scares you? Hmm, if *I* like it then I guess you should be scared after all... Anyways, I liked the end the best. The last six or so sentences^^
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 fragonknight01 2004-07-30 . chapter 1 Quite good. Thanks for posting. |
 barbarataku 2004-07-30 . chapter 1 Nice job. I hope you have more inside. Thanks for sharing. |
 toostupidforyou 2004-07-30 . chapter 1Write more to this. It's agreat begging to a story. And if not, at least have HArry's POV. |
 Ruth 2004-07-30 . chapter 1 aaw...that was rather sweet... :)
not a substitute for another switched chapter, but still a very good story.
i like the way you portrayed Sev..he's just a poor, misunderstood soul realli... :(
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 Cydah 2004-07-29 . chapter 1wonderful piece |
 Saavik13 2004-07-29 . chapter 1this was very well done. it seems simple, but there is a complex layering to it. you can see how deeply sad Severus is, yet see how he's kept a very small part of himself safe and able to hope, even if he won't admit it. And he never did stop understanding, did he? Very very well done. |