Excellent work with Ryoga, I think you perfectly captured his mood.

I look forwards to seeing what this will build up into and what more character experiences we will encounter on the way.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

I like the statistical mind of Shampoo. I really think she isn't in love with Ranma, or atleast she controlled it in conjunction with her Amazon Law.

We agree completely on everything so far, I like that!

:D

Excellent chapter!

Love the way you played out Shampoo's perspective.

Look forwards to seein who's next.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Extremely vague. Very amusing and I did enjoy reading it! I don't have a clue where you are taking this...

Maybe that is a good thing.

Hmm. That was really cool. I enjoy reading perspectives like this. I can understand where both of them are coming from. I guess love can be frustrating in those kind of ways, eh? Anywho, I wonder, are you going to continue this? And if so are you going to continue it just between these two until it reaches some conclusion or are you going to let it s pread through all of the characters? Ah well, I guess I'll find out later.

Great story though, hope you write more.

Ciao. ^_~

very much in character and respecting a 16 year-old teen point of view; i think it's very well done. Are you going to write a piece about every character of the series?

Thank you, although Akane's ranting about Ranma has been done countless times in the past, you still manage to make it sound original - especially the part about Ranma being "perfect". (In my opinion, they're just being immature. But then, so what? Everyone is immature in their own way ^_^)

Beautiful once again, really sorry I didn't read this sooner...

Good lcuk & best wishe3s,

Hououza

You know I'm kicking myself now, why didn't I read the first chapter of this...what was I thinking at the time.

That was beautiful, plain and simple.

I'm going to go back and read the first chapter now, something that I should have done before.

I appreciate a fanfic that is as well written as yours. I really do love the stories that show POV for Ranma and his feelings.

luv it r u gunna continue? u should and try 2 make the chappies longer k? well update soon it very good!

its short, very very in character, and brings you back to the first time you read ranma and went WHY? oh rumiko you torture us!!
i like it lots.