That's really beautiful. Prosepoetry, such a hard medium to pull off. You've done it masterfully.

Sand3

me like it. some of it was kinda confusing but o well.

*chibi usagi

Whoa! Is Fido on vacation or what? My 2nd review is here! Anyways, about your new fic ideas? My advice is: GO FOR IT! I totally love your style of writing! I love it! It's so captivating! *grin* I'm REALLY looking forward to reading White Lie and War is Kind so try to make sure you have both out before *shudder* school starts. I'll be checking for them! ;)

Whoa... This is really deep... Makes me want to feel the wind rush past my hair. ;)

Eloquent and captivating. I'd like to see more of Folken in your work.

wow...*

That was amazing! Really well-written, absolutly incredible! And it does sounds very like Folken.

Oh! I like-the angst! The angst! Misery suits Folken like a second glove...could I please archive this story for my new Folkie shrine?

I really like the way this was written, and I do think it is possible that Folken would think such things. I liked it.

Your story is very lovely. I think that Folken could have very easily thought this way, although he still fails to see that he too is blind to the truth and looks with his eyes. Why doesn't he believe his brother? I love your descriptions of the sea, the sky, and the wind. Very nice writing.

hehe...ur right...i *would* hafta denounce you if you got *anywhere* near lemons ::wink wink:: _ newaize...interesting fic...surprised you're still thinking about longfellow after finals _ keep on writing...it's good for ya...and stay off that mocha frappacino...you saw what it did to me ::cough cough:: hehe [ack...i reallie should be writing my own fic huh...ok...i'll figure sumpin out soon] ::smiles evilly::

That was truly profound. I wrote something like that, except it's in the misc. section. _ Social criticizing... "Because they see with their eyes." I love that line! Do yuo, by any chance, like Pocahontas's 'Colors of the Wind?' _