Very interesting! I can't wait for the next chappie!

BlackRose

OMG I'm really wondering what's going to happen next now. xD Especially since Sephiroth is lying for Alex. Please update soon! I hope you haven't abandoned this story it's wonderful so far. Keep up the good work with your other writing as well. =P

*staring at screen* Wow major case of writers block, or just giving up a good story? *pulls out dagger and stabs the first person walking by* please update, or else more people who don't exist will be killed with imaginary weapons.

Whoo! Cliff hanger! :D

Quite entertaining, I must say. Keep it up!

KEKEKE! Man, I usually never give OC or selfish insertions a chance, but I thought, "Well, I'm extremely bored... what the hell..."

Not bad so far! You are a very decent writer, and I'm quite enjoying this. Onvard, to chanper two! :D

This is so cool! Please update it soon!^ ^

pretty good. you might want to bring cloud in to the story after this as a sparing partner.

I cant wait till the next chapter if your still planning on continuiung this! and i hope you will! =D Its getting good so please upload the next one once you finished writing it and don't leave us hangin with this cliffie! xD ^^~~

*staring blankfaced at screen*
Tala Tempest: *waves a hand in LOTD's face* Ey, you alright there?
LadyoftheDrow: six-sixteen . . .
Tala Tempest: Huh? *looks at screen* *frowns* Ooh. . .geez, that's a major case of writers block. *flinches* And on a cliffhanger, too. *looks at LOTD sympathetically* Maybe coffee will cheer you up! Oi! Katana!
Katana: *appears out of nowhere* What?
Tala: got any coffee for Lady here?
Katana: whatever. . .*mug of steaming coffee appears out of nowhere**disappears*
LadyoftheDrow: *Spots coffee mug, takes a sip, makes a face* Where's the sugar?
Tala: Oh, here *reaches into pocket and pulls out a big bag of sugar*
LadyoftheDrow: Why are you walking around with a bag of sugar in your pocket?
Tala: *shrugs* Dunno
Katana: *appears and stares at MRE* Update.
*blackout*
LadyoftheDrow: Damn it! Who forgot to pay the %*#$@^ power bill!?

This is really good and I can't wait for you to up-date! So Hurry up!

That was a great fic!I hope you countinue it!Exsuse the bad spelling!Thats not my strongest subject in the least!

I just read the Mako Red Eyes chapters.I really enjoyed them and I hope their contuned.I want to find out what happens to Alexia.

ya know this is a good story id like see more of it.

Magnificent. Fantastic. and wonderful. I cannot *puts stress on cannot* wait for more. Plz plz plz plz plz update soon

AHH!! So cool!! I'm going to have to read more. I'm adding you to my favorites. A friend of mine had said you were a really good writer and I believe she didn't lie. Do you think you could look at my FF7 and Naruto fics sometimes and give me some tips?