This was one of the best stories(storys idk) that I have ever read even though it's the first Redwall fanfic I have read, please make a sequel for it would be FANTASTIC!

that was so sweet!
I love romance storys write a second chapter!

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You ought to make a series about this, where certain couples get into situations like this, where they're dancing and there's a song in the background, yadda yadda yadda.

Aw. So sweet. :)

I like it! The story is cute and well written.

That was so good! I'm sorry it's over. The mice actually acted like actuall people.

This story is quite cute!

(sniffle) that was beautifully romantic! more like that wouldn't hurt.

Aw! That was so cool! I never read a Redwall AU before, and I must tell you it was amazing! I absolutely loved it!

O so god! its such a good romance! keep writing more k?

Aw! Maybe it's just the romance, but I actually like this better than the actual books. Those kindof chafe on me because of the monotonous good will all of them have; in your fic they act more like real people. Nice job.

this story is great and wish for you to create more

I loved this story! Being a Redwall fan that I am, I know the characters's personalities well, and you portrayed them perfectly! Keep it up!

I realize that I didn't say what I liked about this fic. I really liked it. As I said in my last review, the things about "girls" and "Guys", "money" and "classes" don't really fit in the Redwall setting, but I loved the Romance. I'm a sucker for well written romance fics. I just found it so sad that at the end, she left, and he didn't know who she was, she didn't know him... Will they ever find out? That was really really sweet. And the song fit in perfectly. I don't think they'd have that at Redwall, but it worked. Its much better than some of the modern songs that are put into these fics.
I loved it!

I liked the Cinderella vibe to this.

But, I think that you made the mice seem too human. I noticed a lot of the use of "boys" "guys" and "girls". Those terms only apply to humans. Try "maids". For the "guys" use their species. Or, "The abbeybeasts".

I don't rememember any classes or money in Redwall. At Redwall, everyone helped out, and were treated like equals. They didn't have or need money.

but, the overall plot of this was good. I liked it.