woah .. thats cute in sad bitter way ... poor sally-kins! XD update some please *peace*

This is a really good story! I like how you did the whole thing with the dreams. Keep it up! Later
*~*Chelsea

Yet another person that agrees with PumpkinPrincess - I'm really not big on anti Jack/Sally fics, since Tim Burton made it pretty clear at the end that they are "simply meant to be." But this was well written and is a new concept rather then the routine 'Jack dumps Sally for original-marysue-character or Shock' (XD He's too old for her!! XDD *my opinion, no offense to JackxShock supporters XDD), so you've pretty much caught my attention ^_~

Really hope to see an update soon, I'd like to see where this is going!!

Hm.. I'm liking it so far. I'm curious to see what's going to happen. I'm putting you on my alery list and hope to see an update soon. :)

i agree with pumpkin princess...its a good story, but i seriously hope they make up. you've got a good concept so far, but seeing as i'm a big jack and sally fan, i hope they'll come to some aggreement with the relationship. ^_^

NO! Jack and Sally CAN'T break up! They're simply ment to be. Please, please, please make them get back together!