I think this is very good, though her name sounds not very wizardish.

Good job!

That was *very* cool. You could see her with such a string voice, like you could actually *hear* her speaking. It was quite good and very powerful for how short it was.
I would very much like to read more of what you have to say about Dorcas Meadowes.

Yay for our Dorcas vibe, Draky! I'm glad you got your fic done (as mine is still being planned). Wow! It's beautiful! Your language is lovely, and I love the progression and style you've used--it all comes together perfectly and the end is...WOW. Excellent work!
--AM :)

Nice monologue. You captured the solemn bracing for the inevitable, yet there is defiance and pride. It has the feeling of a last letter, manifesto or final diary entry.
I like the eye of the day, it sounds poetic and mystical. I didn't realise Mata Hari was Indonesian, but I guess I havent got the historical background fresh in memory : - )