i had a lil tear but its way better than i could do and i liked it its ok

wow... angsty. and also undeniably bakura-like.

ZnM: !_! *sniffle* Aw, Bakura needs a hug!
Bakura: I hate hugs. I hate you. I hate sympathy.
ZnM: (pouncing on Bakura and wrapping him in many squeezy hugs) I SHALL CALL YOU SQUISHY AND YOU WILL BE MINE!
Bakura: Ack!!

...

Yeah, okay, I have problems.
Bakura: Not as many problems as me.
Stay out of this, the dialogue's done!
Bakura: Make me.
Agh! This isn't even a review anymore! All I wanted was to say GOOD JOB DICEY, GREAT STORY!
Bakura: I hate reviews.

baku!

Get out of my head.
This is almost exactly what I was driving at in White Shadows. But you do it so much better than I ever could.

Nice to see something new, and something of such excellent quality.
Bye!

Wow...It's amazing...YOU'RE THE BEST YGO WRITER EVER!

Lol...Well...I DO mean it. ^_^ *Chuckles * I may be joking around a bit...but I DO think you're one of the best writers out there.

Excellent work, and yes. There ARE a lot of Bakura and Ryou muses...

But I think as for all other Bakura (Just Bakura...not Ryou.) muses, this is the best I've read. And THANKFULLY isn't a death fic! ^_^