poor naruto must be so confused.

ah I wanna cry!

well you came back in the summer with 'pet' so maybe if I let you know, maybe you'll come back with this too. Because you wanna know why? Because this is the most creative, well thought out, fic I have ever read. And I only read good fics, I'm high mantinence when it comes to anime. But your an amazing author, your imagery, detail, and style of writing in general is just fantastic. and I cant believe you've left; and surprisingly enough I have more faith of you comeing back that I do of a author that I feel so in love with who left in 07. All I know is if you dont come back I will just have to start a MISSION COPYCAT2 where I will adapt your style of writing and finish your stories for you! hahah! like I could, damn what a waste! your gonne!

I think you should come back ((goes and counts)) because 7/22 seven out of your twenty-two stories are still incomplete. Your one of the first authors of naruto on here too, dont you take total pride in that? most those authors made tons of stories, all the firsts of the ideas, never finished, then left. Its tragic! your such an amazing writer and you've made all these great stories, people love you! You can leave all over again but you shouldn't leave stories incomplete! its irresponsible! I always take the fanfailure authors more seriously than others. you've got the fanfailure and I want to cry! please come back so it can be cured. I am begging. do you notice? I am, can you tell? wah

Okay so your story, its magnificent. Its just so awesome its hard to stand it not ever being finished, like its an already crazy idea then its deep too and makes you guess all the more! So I think sasukes knows whats going on, I think he knows that hes the sasuke from the book and that gaara is too and naruto as well, so hes just ahead of the game and knew naruto would fall in love with gaara so he sought him out first and got naruto to fall in love with so that when gaara came around he would already have the prize((naruto)) and shikamaru, well I know he will figure it out but whats that gonna do? does he want to stop it? whos side is he on, he would be on narutos, but naruto is wanting to be on both sides and shikamaru is more of the intelligent side and knows thats not possible. I dont know what you have up your sleeve! but I might never find out too!

I read this story a read ago, never finished and finished today. yes that long and still remember. but the matter of the fact is nothing has changed, you maybe over naruto, or in college or have a life or whatever you could be dead! I dont know and will never understand why someone leaves, but you always seemed inspired and updated quick and loved this coupleing so why the change of heart? was it me? haha, no. I dont know what I can say or do to get you come back here right this instint! so read it a year ago as I said, along with a few other of your stories before that, cant just believe its over((maybe)) What about the 'mind**' you promied? what about gaara? and whos naruto going to pick? whats sasuke thinking? whats kakashi and iruka doing? whats happening? homez?

All I ask for is a reply to this, even a little 'im alive and never returning **' about work! just give me a sign, a sign to anything. ahh

thanks for everything you have left for now and in hopes of your return. so dramatic huh?

Update... PLEASE?!? unless you're dead then i can't expect you to update... or you're a zombie

is this Sasuke/Naurto or Gaara/Naruto

*whispers(please be gaanaru please be gaanaru)*

please continue, cuz this is awsome with the supense, love thrill, and the memrory its all awsome

damn good story, shame it's gaara and not sasuke with naruto!

First of all, I hate you... XD I finished reading this chapter and its the last one then I check the update date and I almost died! I've been bothering my friend for almost 10 minutes now babbling about god knows what because this story has been ''dead'' for over a year now. I would so like it if you would update this fic because it's such a good story and it leaves you longing for more which there isn't... So please update~! :)
(this is the longest review I have ever written... >.> ... XD)

~Psychelle

Very interesting :)

Hey how can you write four great chapters and then not update it for over a year. do you how stuff like this can affect your viewers. I think this is one you really need to to go back too. Plus I really got into it and can't wait to find out what happens next.

i love this story u have to finish it plz i cant wait for the next chapters ^_^ GREAT JOB!

wow this is just the best romantic fantasy ive ever read! it makes perfect sense why naruto could read the book over and over and never tire of it. i do that with the book my nan gave me! i like how sasuke and the others are nice, you dont see that enough. it really hurts me how others portray sakura to be a total **, but you conveyed her as a perfect understanding friend. now, i have said my nicities, so here is the maditory threat;

UPDATE SOON OR MY AT THE MERCY OF MY ARMY OR RABID CHIBI INUYASHA AND SASUKE STUFFIES THAT DO MY BIDDING *insert evil laugh here*!

much love

hope x

. . . I love it. . . I need more, please!! I nearly CRIED when I saw the last update! You have talent to be able to come up with such a storyline. I for one haven't read one like this before. I hope that one day I will be able to see more. It is very interesting though, I think the fact that you have two stories in one is very cool. Thank you for writting the story even if you never update again(no matter how cruel that would be lol). I look forward to your future writings. =^.^=

I hate this story I hate this story so much that...That I ** love it! Please continue!

Things are just a little bit confusing. Man Sasuke is so understanding.I don't think so but anyways I don't understand that about Kakashi and Iruka knowing something. Its kind of creepy.Anyways hope you Update soon ! ^.^

^.^ oh **