Wow this is really good and it was a really good idea to do the past of joe because it was really interesting, me and 2 girls from school all read this together as we are all book freaks and can't help ourselfs so we where all just wondering wether you would be able to do one on jack Aburey because he must have lots of different story's of his past to tell spending almost all of his life in the service xxxxxx

hehehehehe. Women.

Dude, I like it. Plot device of lost fortune to be recovered. Former freinds turned snobby jack-ses. Insane flocks of females forcing marriage.

Comes pre-loaded with a senile father in law!

Woman didn't go to Universities then.

Its not all that accurate. Its unlikely that he would have drawers at all. Much more likely he would have had a chest.

All that asside through, its a good writ.

It certainly beats a mary-sue time travel piece. Holy crap do those get old.

I support Nagel! He rocks! And I love Bryan Dick! He also rocks. Loved the story.

Dragon Rider Murtagh

Oh wow. I really liked that story. I wish there was more. They need more Nagel stories.

Sheen

You are such a good writer and tell stories very well. But I wish you hadn't ended it in such a way. You left it open for more of the story.

But I have another idea for another story if you're interested. But you have to e-mail me before I give it to you. It would include a school teacher on the ship. If you read the book you would know that there were women aboard the Surprise.

That is if you're interested.

AHAHAHAHAHAA! POOR BABY NEGLE! AHAHAHAHAA! please continue...

Your Hobbity Friend...

I am so very glad to be able to read more of your story.

I enjoy reading about Joe Nagle. Looking forward to more. I have alkso written stories about Nagle and would love it if you read mine. You can ind them at:

I love this story. Please update soon. I can't wait to read about what happens next.

AHAHAHAHH! UPDATE! I luff dis Negle story! Keep wid it!

Your Hobbity Friend...

AHAHAHAHAH! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO OUR BABY! Talk about crulty. I hoped you would update... someday... I almost deleated this from my favs now i'm glad i didn't... even if i'm the only one who reviews update at least once more for me...

Your Hobbity Friend...

I have been anticipating this chapter for along time and am glad to see it. I undertand about having writers block. But I would like to invite you to come read and possibly join a Master and Commander RPG. I think you'd really enjoy it. here's the website if you're interested: s9.

Keep up the good work on your stories! I really enjoy them all!

I'm hooked. Give me more. Big Nagle fan. Also a big Calamy fan. ::hint hint:: :D

MORE! HURRY! I loved this story and it stopped at the good part. Please put some in about Calamy he's my favorate (besides Nagel).

I'm glad you updated. Chapter six has a disappointing ending, though. Of course, in a full-blown mutiny, Nagle would have gotten killed, so I can see your logic.