aw! so cute! love a bit of fluff. can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Awesome story. I loved it! I love this pairing, and you did very well writing it. Definately a favorite.

Damn, that was fantastic! I always half considered this pairing... then finally got off my ** to track something down. I have to say this is a lovely introduction to the GabrielxCarl fandom!
I have to say, this was beautifully written! You've kept characters in character. It's amazing! I love how Carl's curiousity stems their relationship. Have to say that was a definate draw in.
Cheers,
RG

I liked your story very much!It was well done and interesting and I could see this being slightly AU. I enjoyed reading your story are you planning on adding more to it? Is Gabriel still a werewolf or is it just left over side effects from the venom? Or were you planning a cross with Wolverine? It has been done and I'm not saying you have to go there or that was your intent just an odd bit of random thought. Well I've rambled on for long enough thanks for "listening" and thanks again for the story. Bye

nice

Oh! Very, very good! I thoroughly enlyed this and I look forward to reading the next one. You may want to think about upping the rating to M, I'd hate it if you this was deleted from the site. Anyway, this was brilliant!

I loved how all Hell broke loose (literally) with Van Helsing being gone. Brilliant!

I must say I thoroughly enjoyed that! You've kept me from my housework though! Perhaps I should thank you for that as well, LOL!

I know very little about the Inquisition. (Except for what little I learned from Monty Python.)Thanks for the education!

That ending was beautiful! The ticklish feet--hilarious!

I love this! I know I was going to read Sister Wolf first, but I couldn't resist this one.

A restrained Van Helsing would be a sight to behold indeed.

I love this line. "Carl? Are you still there? Or did you really find a coin?" LOL!

I like your characterization of Carl. He still has his innate quirkiness that made him so endearing in the movies.

You do well with Van Helsing also! His curt manner and no-nonsense style comes through quite nicely.

Carl collapsing after the kiss was too funny, although if Gabriel kissed me I would likely do the same.

I love this!

Oh my goodness, this is by far the cutest chapter I've read in my life. Most of this had me smiling and that ending was so adorable!!

note: another verse bout homosexual intercourse is Romans 1:26-28

that was so damn cool! i loved it and i am going to read the rest right now! i'm so excited for carl (cuz evry time i see 'im, i imagine Faramir [played by the same guy] and it makes my stomach flutter)! Plus, VH is so cute as well.

NOX

I go back and read this everyday. It is so cute! This is my favourite part about your writing, the little tickling and cuddling moments of Gabriel and Carl...makes one jealous. Hehe. I can't wait for your next installment, you are so talented at moving your audience.
love and hugs

Great story! =D
Thanks for the Nosebleeds & VH/C goodness. XD

Nice fic. It was interesting and rather entertaining with Carl's cuteness. LOL He's a funny pickle. Well done.
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DreamWeaver