Wondeful story. What's amazing is that the chapters got progressively more well written as they went on, this last one doesn't hold a candle to the first one. (Grammer crap and simple sentences turned into a bit more detailed, with less mistakes to none at all.) A job well done, it had me reading all night non-stop.

On top of enjoying it immensely, it was a very clever plot that allowed the reader to explore different angles of not only the relationship, but the characters. Thank you for writing an epic Sousuke/Kaname fanfic, it's just what I needed.

A thoroughly enjoyable story!

I like how you depicted the progression of their relationship. I think too often people writing fics like these jump into the sex factor without establishing the relationship base and thus cheapen it. Here though you made sure that base had a solid foundation first and it was very tastefully done.

I also thought it was interesting how you interwove some history factoids, science and politics into the storyline. As a history buff myself I can hardly complain :) At times I think they may have gotten a bit wordy, but they served their purpose in the end. An interesting way to get a message across to your audience, that is for sure.

I realize you wrote this some years ago, but it's a fic to be proud of. Nice work ;)

Langus

Omg, so much detail, so much EVERYTHING!
I love it!!

First, I've to aware you that my English it's not very good. So please forgive me if I'm not very clear. About your fic, I think it's admirable the way you use the characters, you know how to make them almost real with their emotions. Congratulations. You're a great writer!! Try it with you're own characters, I'm sure you're going to do such a great story, 'cause you've got the talent. Bye!

I love this. I read it a few weeks ago before I had an account...but I love it.

omg that is the best fanfic ive evr read no kidding! i loved it

Hi! I've already read this years ago but i'm not yet a member there and i don't know how to be one hehehe! Well the only thing i want to say is that your story is cool and i really love you made them very mature! And the POEM rocks!

AWESOME story! Fun and light-hearted, a nice change of pace from your other fics, though I love them all. This is by far my favorite line -- "The hypothalamus controls the "Four F's": fighting, fleeing, feeding, and mating.'"

Nice job!

that was a great story! it is the first f.m.p story i have read; and not, by far, my last. ^_^

Fantastic! A great piece of art! OMG! It was just so friggin' good! I had never tried to read a FMP fic of you, so at first I wasn't really sure of what to expect. But this.. this seriously was better than anything I'd hope for. Thanx for writin' such a nice fic!

WOW!! That was the best fanfiction I've ever read. And that's saying something. I've read over a hundred. There are no words to explain how good this was. Sure there were some mispelled words but everyone has those, and I could still understand everything. That was an awesome fic!

WOW!! That was the best fanfiction I've ever read. And that's saying something. I've read over a hundred. There are no words to explain how good this was. Sure there were some mispelled words but everyone has those, and I could still understand everything. That was an awesome fic!

Great

...That was one of the greatest works of fanfiction I have ever read. I was impressed by the amount of detail and information in both the thoughts of the characters and the lectures/lessons. The character development was amazing, and the romance was just beautiful.

I was instantly hooked when I read the first chapter, neglecting all of my own work just so I could finish this. I'm now realzing how much my works pale in comparison to yours, and I thought I was pretty decent.

...I think I have a new idol. ^_^ Thank you for that wonderful reading experience.

Your knowledge... of everything is so vast. I'm glad i get the opportunity to read your works. (which i also add, wish i could be as knowledgeble yourself!!)