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| Jeannette 2008-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseFirst, I've to aware you that my English it's not very good. So please forgive me if I'm not very clear. About your fic, I think it's admirable the way you use the characters, you know how to make them almost real with their emotions. Congratulations. You're a great writer!! Try it with you're own characters, I'm sure you're going to do such a great story, 'cause you've got the talent. Bye! |
| Sousukes-Girl 2007-09-27 ch 1,  | abuseI love this. I read it a few weeks ago before I had an account...but I love it. |
| Heather 2007-07-28 ch 19, anon. | abuseomg that is the best fanfic ive evr read no kidding! i loved it |
| saihei 2007-06-15 ch 19, | abuseHi! I've already read this years ago but i'm not yet a member there and i don't know how to be one hehehe! Well the only thing i want to say is that your story is cool and i really love you made them very mature! And the POEM rocks! |
| Tairi Soraryu 2007-06-03 ch 19, | abuseAWESOME story! Fun and light-hearted, a nice change of pace from your other fics, though I love them all. This is by far my favorite line -- "The hypothalamus controls the "Four F's": fighting, fleeing, feeding, and mating.'" Nice job! |
| inubaby2 2006-10-21 ch 19, | abusethat was a great story! it is the first f.m.p story i have read; and not, by far, my last. ^_^ |
| MisSs|005~ 2006-10-03 ch 19, anon. | abuseFantastic! A great piece of art! OMG! It was just so friggin' good! I had never tried to read a FMP fic of you, so at first I wasn't really sure of what to expect. But this.. this seriously was better than anything I'd hope for. Thanx for writin' such a nice fic! |
| Gfam89 2006-07-17 ch 19, anon. | abuseWOW!! That was the best fanfiction I've ever read. And that's saying something. I've read over a hundred. There are no words to explain how good this was. Sure there were some mispelled words but everyone has those, and I could still understand everything. That was an awesome fic! |
| Gfam89 2006-07-17 ch 19, anon. | abuseWOW!! That was the best fanfiction I've ever read. And that's saying something. I've read over a hundred. There are no words to explain how good this was. Sure there were some mispelled words but everyone has those, and I could still understand everything. That was an awesome fic! |
| Old Dragon 2006-05-18 ch 19, | abuseGreat |
| Kouji Tamino 2006-02-01 ch 19, | abuse...That was one of the greatest works of fanfiction I have ever read. I was impressed by the amount of detail and information in both the thoughts of the characters and the lectures/lessons. The character development was amazing, and the romance was just beautiful. I was instantly hooked when I read the first chapter, neglecting all of my own work just so I could finish this. I'm now realzing how much my works pale in comparison to yours, and I thought I was pretty decent. ...I think I have a new idol. ^_^ Thank you for that wonderful reading experience. |
| Zang-sama 2006-01-21 ch 4, | abuseYour knowledge... of everything is so vast. I'm glad i get the opportunity to read your works. (which i also add, wish i could be as knowledgeble yourself!!) |
| Zang-sama 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abusePretty good so far... |
| Aislin Oriel 2005-11-30 ch 19, | abuseHow wonderful. I was expecting an ending to be a little more depressing, but I'm glad you kept it light hearted. Poor Sousuke taking a blow for Kurz... I feel all warm and tingly now... |
| Cursedenigma 2005-10-29 ch 19, | abuseNice ending with the comedy of his injury...awesome story...time for the next... |